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From ANON - Sharanesu on December 15, 2003
Yes, yes, yes! An update! Can't tell you enough how much I love this story! It's fantastic and we have more chapters to go! So looking forward to more.

Thanks for sharing, Shara Nesu
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From ANON - Cashiel on December 14, 2003
I'm with Jack on this one; Will may forgive the little bastard, but I won't. I still wish bad things for him...
Anyway, it was nice to have an update, keep them coming.

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From ANON - attirb on December 07, 2003
Oh, by the way where can we find the story "Pirate Dreams" ?
I would like to read it?
Can you or anybody help?
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From ANON - attirb on December 07, 2003
I liked the story...but I don't like the latest chapter.
Did you need to have them all raped?
:-(
Well, and besides a question of logic:
I know this is AU
but the pirates are no longer of flesh and blood
they only seem to be.
They are walking skeletons (!)
which means the can't eat, the don't have any bodily functions
and that also equals they aren't able to use their cocks = ape ape possible!
Oh, and as much as I like love triangles I agree with the review that said it is impossible after what happend.
Obsession isn't so easy to leave behind.
Jake couldn't and wouldn't forgive Charles for being responsible for the damage
and hurt done not only to his friends but specially to Will.
Hello, several were killed because of Charles, he were tortured and the others raped!
No forgiveness from Jake = no love triangle.
Even if Will would ever be able to...
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From ANON - Grey Elven-Eyes on December 06, 2003

Jack: *huggles Will*

Will: *huggle Jack back*

Charles: *huggles cute new OC*

Elven: *does happy dance* No offense, but I'm not too big on the love triangle. You've already stated that Jack does not like Charles, and Charles does not really like Jack. Will was stated as not being able to see Charles like 'that' and Charles was borderline OBSESSED! I mean, how can someone fall in love with someone else who wanted to RAPE them?!

Jack: I agree wholeheartedly. And--wait...how did you get freed from the mast?

Will: Good question.

Elven: *does best drunken pirate (aka Jack) impion*ion* Yer forgetting one very important thing, mate.....I'm Captain Jack Sparrow!

Jack: *laughs* Very amusing. *motions to Elven*

Elven: *sighs and holds wrists together* The shackles? *frowns as Will ties her wrists together*

Will: You know it's for your own good.

Elven: *holds up bound hands to stop the gag from being put back in* But wha' about one thing.

Jack:'s 's that?

Elven: The OC I was mentioning earlier with Charles.

Charles: *Thinks* We have to give them a cool name.

*all four sit down to think*

Jack: Sean? Seth? Ryan?

*Ryan magically poofs onto the deck*

Ryan: What the bloody hell?!

Elven: Wait! He doesn't have any looks or character yet! *Ryan poofs out of the scene*

Jack: He's someone they meet in Tortuga. He bumps into them and helps them

Will: He has bright blue eyes and really straight long blond hair.

Elven: Is it just me, or does that sound like Legolas?

Will: *shifty eyes* Well, the author wanted to do a love triangle. What about changing the name to Orlando or something like that?

Elven: Will, you're making no sense.

Will: *sighs exasperatedly* I'm trying to say that since Jack doesn't like Charles, Charles doesn't like Jack, I love Jack, Jack loves me, Charles loves me, I don't love Charles 'that' way, can't the author just put in a character like me from another movie?

Jack: *falls down anime-style*

Elven: O__O;; 're 're insane, you know that?

Will: But it works!

Charles: He's right. It does.

Jack: *from place on floor* For once, Will made less sense than me, but the lad has a point, lass.

Elven: *throws up hands in exasperation* Fuckin' weird ass pirates... *grumbles*

Good job on making at least one of the cursed crew have a heart!

Ta!
Elven

And PLEASE! no love triangles! *pouts*
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From ANON - Carmela on December 05, 2003
Hi!
Lovely chapter! It was very impressive, Charles' attitude, and all I hope is Jack to forgive him... A triangle could be a very good idea. Ehhh... six times a day, and all the crew?? you are really naughty, LOL! Poor boys... :P
I am eagerly expecting for a new chapter. One question: where can I find that fic, Pirate Dreams, by ALex Tandra? I haven't read it and I would like to.
PLease, go on with the story!
Carmela.
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From ANON - RosePetal2001 on December 05, 2003
I like how this chapter turned out like how Charles went back to the good side of thing though I do hope Ragetti is O.K. since he did try to save them all and isn't Barbossa and his crew still under the cruse? And ya I think it would be neat if you did the whole love triangle thing. Thanks.

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From ANON - Lydia NightShade on December 05, 2003
Yay!
You didn't have Charles rape little Will. Although, my poor baby was still hurt. I don't really want a threesome, but it's your story. Although I do feel bad for Charles. And yay for Ragetti! I'm so excited for the next chapter!!! Oh and thanks for reminding me about Leave Me Lying Here,! I ! I totally forgot..... I'll go post that now. Have a great weekend hun!

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From ANON - RosePetal2001 on December 03, 2003
Please tell me Jacks going to be awake when Charles tries to or does take will becouse jack is wills hero I think he should have a cape and evey thing.LOL Any way I hope you update soon cause I can't wait to find out how it goes. Thanks. It's an awsome story by the way.
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From ANON - Grey Elven-eyes on November 30, 2003

Elven: *in the process of strangling Charles*

Jack: *watching*

Will: *also watching*

Anamaria: *grinning* Tha's right! You show him who's boss!

Tracy: O__O;; Isn't anyone afraid we'll get caught?

Jack: *looks at Tracy* I don't think /we/ would count as actually doing anythin'. Elven's the one who's doin' the stranglin'.

Will: *nods in agreement*

Elven: *still strangling Charles, who has turned a flattering shade of blue* Stupid...fuckin'...betrayer...GAH! *snatches Charles by the hair and hauls him off the ship*

Jack: (-__-) Now what are we going to do? Ye needed to kill 'im first!

Will: *sweatdrop*

Elven: *rounds on Jack* Do you want some of this?! Do you!? I'm not happy with the rapist son o' bitch! *gets held back from jumping over the rail and drowning Charles by Will*

Will: Easy there! We'll see what's in store, /later/, okay?

Elven: *gets tied to the mast by Jack* But Will--! *Anamaria puts gag in* (*muffled*) Damnit!

Anamaria: Don't worry, lass. It'll all work out, but only if you don't kill anyone before the rest of us has a chance.

Jack: Savvy? Though I rather enjoyed the show...

Elven: *sighs* (*muffled*) Savvy...

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Elven

P.S. Great lemon!! ^__^ *does happy dance, but cannot do it very well for she is still tied to the mast* Damn...
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From ANON - NEWENIT on November 30, 2003
YOU ABSOLUTELY DID NOT DISAPPOINT ME...THIS WAS SPECTACULAR!!! I LOVED THE SWEET TENDERNESS THAT JACK TREATED WILL WITH ON HIS FIRST TIME...SO SO SWEET, ENTLENTLE, SO FULL OF LOVE....AND VERY HOT NOT TO MENTION...

I REALLY FELT SORRY FOR THE WOMEN, BUT, I THINK THEY ARE PRETTY TOUGH AND WILL BOUNCE BACK BEFORE LONG...I HOPE THEY GET TO CASTRATE SOME OF THE BASTARDS....

AND CHARLES....WELL, MAY HIS COCK FALL OFF BEFORE HE GETS TO OUR SWEET WILL.......AND IF HE DOES RAPE WILL MAY IT FALL OFF AFTERWARDS...HEHE

DID I MENTION I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE...AND VERY SOON.....GOOD JOB, VERY GOOD!!

NEWENIT
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From ANON - Cashiel on November 30, 2003
I'm so completely loving this story so fBut But you better give Anamaria and Tracy some good revenge action later on. Not on Charles, though, since I think all revenge action taken on him - and there should be plenty - should come from Jack. Okay, maybe Will can pitch in a little, but mainly Jack, yes?
Update soon, okay?
Cashiel
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From ANON - Lydia NightShade on November 30, 2003
Eeeeee!!!
I was right! Aww that was so sweet! My poor babies! I don't want them to be separated! It's just so sad and so good. I so can't wait for the next chapter so you better update soon! I'm so excited for the next chapter!

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From ANON - Axu on November 30, 2003
Great work again:). I can�t wait to read more:).
Thank you.
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From ANON - Grey Elven-Eyes on November 24, 2003

*pouts* WHY!? I LOVE ANAMARIA! *glomps Anamaria*

*glomps Will and Jack, minding Jack's wounds* POOR JACK!! *cries*

Jack: *rolls eyes* I'm fine! Just get off of me!

Will: *eyes well up with tears* Jack! Don't leave me!

Jack: *sighs exasperatedly* ALL of you are BLOODY INSANE!!

Elven: *pouts some more, but releases Jack*

Anamaria: *scowls* Of course. The WOMEN get raped. WHY!? *shoots Ragetti and Pintel* I fell better now. *takes a deep breath*

Will: O____O;;; Didn't see that coming...

Jack: -___-;;; Women...

Elven: O________O Oh my...

Anamaria: ^___^ Much better!

Elven: O__o? Better go!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Elven
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