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Reviews for Leave Me Lying Here

By : lostmarbles
  • From ANON - Morgana-Li on April 14, 2005
    damn, I love this fic! keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Miya Sparrow on April 05, 2005
    OK there is a lot I want to say. But let me first say this WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (pretend that is in really really big font). if Disney hadn't made POTC all... Disney like, and it hadn't been Disney to make POTC. and it was rated NC-17 this would be the result. Cause to me it kind of sends out the same message as POTC did in way, I mean, well I don't know what I mean. I really liked it, its just another, interesting, cool, violent way for Jack and Will to meet, and as much as Jack doesn't like it.....fall in love. You know Jack does that all the time? He realizes that he's falling for some one, and then messes it up, all for reputation, and some other things. but OMG please update. God if you don't I'll die. A painful agonizing death. ahahahah right UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - ayachan on April 01, 2005
    waaaaahhh!!! son of a .... biznatch! SWANN CAN'T DO THAT TO WILL!!!!! -_- omg, you just have to get Jack and will together asap.. and put Swann to ruin.. massive ruin.. and massive humiliation.. make him a homosexual or something argh! well, please keep up the good work and update asap please
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  • From ANON - anonymous_fan on April 01, 2005
    yay another chapter *dances around diliriously* hehehe good chapter too update soon if you can :)
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  • From ANON - Rutaari on April 01, 2005
    OH NO! NONONONONONONONONONONOONNONONONONO!!!!!! Jack is stupid and Will is in trouble and Gov. Swann is a lying ninny and where in the nine hells is Liz and OMG! PLEASE hurry or I'm gonna explode! *sniff* You can't leave Will drugged for TOO long.
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  • From ANON - sallie on April 01, 2005
    *sits down at computer*
    "Let's see what's the list of things that would make me reeeeeeeeaaaaally happy
    to see in this story?"

    1. Norrington, Avery, Bosun, Barbossa, Mr. Swann, and majority of Norington's crew
    (not including Pintel or Riggetty... maybe not Kohler too he's kind of cool...),
    and Mr. Gibbs all die very painful deaths. By killing eachother off!
    2. Gov. Swann get's raped by Norrington. (revenge on the stupid homophobe,
    and not good for old Norry either!)
    3. Avery has to watch while #2 happens! (EWWWWWWWWWWWW)
    4. #2 happens to Avery and Swann has to watch. (ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww)
    5. Gov. Swann looses job and money! (Take that pompous git!)
    6. Jack and Will & Anna and Elizabeth get back together. They heal eachother's
    old wounds.
    7. They all have many adventures.
    8. Gov. Swann, Barbossa, Bosun, Norrington, Avery, and Gibbs are in prison for life.
    9. (Continuing from #8) They become BITCHES!
    10. Will and Jack have hot/sweaty boy-on-boy love!
    11. All of Ex-gov. Swann's money and estates go to Will, Elizabeth, and a foundation
    that supports homosexuals that have been harmened. (counceling, doctors, the works.)
    12. Hahhahahaaah Norrington and Swan are BITCHES!!!!
    ...
    O.O
    Can't wait 'til the next update! Hope one of the above happens!
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  • From ANON - RoseGarden on April 01, 2005
    My poor Will...and poor Jack. The thought of them being separated breaks my heart. I hope Jack comes back for him and whips ass in the process. Keep the chapters coming..your fans are still with you
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  • From ANON - eOR=^.^= on April 01, 2005
    yeah! checked the site just at the oppurtune moment!
    um.. happy april fool's~
    funtabulous chapter! i especially loved the bit about how will felt a sense of pleasure when his wrists started bleeding.
    huzzah!
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  • From ANON - eOR=^.^= on April 01, 2005
    yeah! checked the site just at the oppurtune moment!
    um.. happy april fool's~
    funtabulous chapter! i especially loved the bit about how will felt a sense of pleasure when his wrists started bleeding.
    huzzah!
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  • From ANON - dr. robinson on March 21, 2005
    just noticed a typo in my message from above..

    i meant to say.. it's sometimes nice to have stories not have happy endings. makes it more realistic.


    also, after reading the message u left the anonymous person.. just wanted to comment on the brilliancy of having a sequel involving lots of norrington. i was, initially, rather disappointed from your author's notes in the story, because you had said something about norrington's role dwindling. but the sequel already sounds funtabulous. so, keep up all the fab work!!! norrington's such a distorted character! but all for the better-
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  • From ANON - evelyne on March 21, 2005
    wow! what a turn of events. though the end is near, hopefully there'll be more..?



    poor will! still totally loving the story though. actually, i'm dying for the last chapter. will and jack forever separated would be such a heart-wrenching, but smart, end. it's sometimes nice to have things have happy endings. i think i actually cried when jack dragged will back to his old dwelling.

    perhaps the reason why i'm so drawn to this fic is because it's seemingly realistic.
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  • From ANON - To Anon_Fan from Lydia on March 20, 2005
    Hey, I don't know if you'll check this, but since ya didn't give me an e-mail I figured this was the best way to answer your question. I meant a new chapter, not a new story. I do plan on making a sequel to this story as you probably know from my author's notes, but I'm going to wrap up all the shit with Will & his family first. Sequel will deal with Norrington and all that joy.

    Thanks for your interest in the story. I really appreciate it. ^_^

    ~Lydia NightShade~
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  • From ANON - Anonymous_Fan on March 20, 2005
    OH NOOOOO! how could you do sumthin like that to poor little will *sniffs* jack was very mean to him and even though i love this story i wanna cut jacks balls off ! *pulls out rusty meat scissors with evil glint in eye* can i do it pleease???? i hope that everything gets better in the end cuz jack and will in this story make such a perfect pairing :) i love this story btw and cant wait for your update :) oh and good luck with school lol, i hope it doesnt wipe you out too much....btw when you said start fresh, did you mean a new story or a new chapter cuz i really hope you meant new chapter lol
    ?
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  • From ANON - rutaari on March 17, 2005
    OMFG You evil bitch how could you leave us there!?????

    GAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!



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  • From ANON - SilverScaleSerpent on March 17, 2005
    *bites lip, staring at screen.* Poor Will... there will be more, won't there? Soon, preferably?
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