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Reviews for Leave Me Lying Here

By : lostmarbles
  • From ANON - dark vampire on November 10, 2003
    ahh! this is sooooooo amazing and wonderful and poor adorable will!!! jack will have to take good care of him! ahh! *sob* poor will!! at least he has elizabeth!!!! i really love this fic!!! i love it so so so much!!! well... i kinda' like a nice gibbs better than an evil one... he was always so funny and kind-ish.... now he is scary... like the coach... who is damn evil!! poor wilL!!!! *more sobbing* but anyway.. this is perrrrfect and i can't wait fou tou to write more!!! please!!! *glomp* i love you!!! *kisses* thanx!
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  • From ANON - JackSparrowsWhore on November 09, 2003
    ooo i like it a lot! very dark and crud, i hope Jack will make will feel better...

    i love the PotC and TloTr references... hee hee hee hee

    Keep it up yea. and some such!

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  • From ANON - Mei Leng on November 05, 2003
    That's great! Please post up the rest of the story now *begs*
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  • From ANON - Elfstoner on November 05, 2003
    Wow, that was really good! Write more fast! *evil rabid fic bunnies jump on lostmarbles, chanting: more more more more* Don't mind me, I'm insane. And a slash lover. *whisltes innocently* Awesome fic! Great plotline! And how is Coach Avery (A very large...) going to fit into this? You're such a great writer! *huge hugs*
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  • From ANON - Smiigel on November 05, 2003
    Rancid! That's the band that does "Time Bomb". ^.^ Ahh, this chapter was nice and long... which was actually somewhat aggravating seeing as right now I'm supposed to be studying for the two tests I have tomorrow. Damn you, college! *shakes fist at nothing in particular* This fic looks quite interesting; I'm definitely going to be obsessively monitoring the updates. Mwahahahaha! Hopefully, that won't make your progress suddenly stagnate. ._. I think I'm like the Kiss of h foh for the updating of webpages/fanfiction... dammit! I'm sorry! I'm also sorry I'm rambling, rambling, rambling --*slaps self* Anyway, before I nance off... you said you don't mind constructive criticism, so I'd like to contribute. I'm not trying to be bitchy, really... I just think that, eh, sometimes people can over-dramatize... like having the characters shouting/yelling every other line... eh, I dunno, maybe it's just my being nitpicky. ._. Anyway, I'kinkin' it bunches, so keep up the good work! It's always nice to have something to allow me to procrastinate and screw off further.
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  • From ANON - BLACK*PLAGUE on November 04, 2003
    To anser your question, Yes there is a Port Royale, Jamaca, That is where the movie story-line was set. There is also a Port Royal Minnesota, one in New Jersy, and one in North Dakota; take your pick... Good Story idea, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Steph on November 04, 2003
    I read your story on the charactersinbloom yahoogroup message board, and I absolutley loved it. You note at the end of your poste the that you have 13 chapters written, and you have 13 weeks to write a conclusion. Does that mean you are going to post one chapter a week? I'm a fic whore when it comes to a story I love, and I think I'll die from want if I wait that long. Can we please have an extra special treat and get your next post a little sooner. If not, I certainly won't complain...I'll just mope a little;)
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