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By : lostmarbles
  • From ANON - Smiigel on December 05, 2003
    I love you.
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  • From ANON - Citadel on December 05, 2003
    YES!!! Jack kissed Will! More more more! I love the line that goes "what is it with older men and finding everthing I do enticing?" Poor Will, its not just older men, its a bunch of obssessive fangirls too! Must be hard to be so damn sexy. Speaking of sexy, please please please make that threat about Jack taking all of Will's clothes away happen, that would hysterical. And speaking of hysterical, I loved Elizabeth's 'ride of death' in the limo, very funny. Anyway, can't wait for more tension between Will and Jack, each little bit drives me crazy!
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  • From ANON - MahieSparrow on December 05, 2003
    Hi Lydia,it's so great!!!!! Wow!!!! I loved that! It was so cute when Jack kissed Will after he said he was adopted. awwwww I love them so much! Jack couldn't really be a kidnapper. He's too soft. LOL But I like him this way. :) I can't wait for them to get together! Hope they make love soon! :) Ah,by the way,I wasn't thinking about a threesome to my fic,no,just Will to get a little confused and maybe kiss Charles once or twice willingly. But of course he's staying with Jack in the end. :) And no way to have a Jack/charles/Will thing,Jack would never have Charles,LOL. Well,I'll be looking forward to next week's chapter! Don't ye dare to forget it! LOL just kidding luv,have a nice weekend too! :) Bye!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2003
    very good
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  • From ANON - Foresworn on December 04, 2003
    Wow! Cha Chapter! Damn! Barbossa must had been planning for a long time, to get Avery into his plan! And totally loving stalker abeit drunk n ranting Gibbs. It such a change frm his usual role that it refreshing! Hahah finally Jack gets to be alone with the whelp! Heheh am I the only one loving how Jack detests Will at this point of time? :D Haha definately can see Jack watching Cartoon Network, and thumbs up to the cheese rice thingy, it does sound de-licous! The talking out loud's great too, gives us a view to how Jack's mind works, and it works totally for terrifying Will that he been kidnapped by a apparently rambling goofy mad Jack :) Woow will Bardossa track our dear heroes down and be the villian of the show again? Update again soon dear :) !
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  • From ANON - roxie on December 03, 2003
    I am really loving this story, although it is quite different from any other potc fics i've read. i'm enjoying the characterization of jack as amoral, much less honorable than he appears in the movie, however, i'm still wondering if he'll eventually break down and let out a hidden, compassionate side. basically i just want more! more chapters! more updates! info about jack's past? *hopeful*
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  • From ANON - dark vampire on November 30, 2003
    poor will!!! he is soooo abused!!! *hugs* jack will take care of him... sort of... heh.... well, i am sure that jack will really take car him him later when it gets all yummy and romanic!!! *glomp* i love you!!! *kiss* thanx!! please write more sooN!
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  • From ANON - Raffie on November 25, 2003
    I can tell you that your fic it's absolutely great!! Poor Orli, I like the way you characterized him... and Johnny too!! Aww, I think that now the most interesting part will begin... I can't wait to see the developments between them... there'll be developments,
    won't there?? I hope that J will help Orli somehow...
    I read in the reviews that you have 13 chapters written, Having read only the first 5... may I ask you when the others will be
    available, or if maybe - begging puppy eyes - you could do me the HUGE favor of sending them privately to me? I can't resist, I have to read what's next as soon as possible! :D
    Thanks anyway, and keep up the good work, you're great!!

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  • From ANON - ButterBalls on November 22, 2003
    Ooooo! I love this story! I don't usually read AU, finding it just too...well, weird...but this one is great. They don't seem too OOC for an AU; I'm impressed. And I am DYING to see Jack and Will shag! Get on with it already :p Or at least *really* build up the suspense for a couple of chapters and make their eventual union explosive.
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  • From ANON - Sharanesu on November 21, 2003
    Hiya! I just love this story! Well, I love any story you've written, and I'm hoping for more of all of them. Is that too much to ask? What if I beg *pretty please!*

    Thanks for sharing, Shara Nesu
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  • From ANON - dark vampire on November 16, 2003
    ahhhhhhhhH!!!! this is sooooooo awesome and exciting and poor adorable will!! everyone wants him!!! *snicker* but jack will take care of him!!! *cheers* thank you soooooo much!!! i love this fic sooo much!!! you are soooooooo amazing!! *glomp* i love you!!! *kisses* thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! *more kisses* please write more soohat hat will happen to poor will? will elizabeth be all freaked out and try to rescue him? (hey! it's like the movie... but reversed!!! *giggles*) anyway! i am soooooo excited for the next chapter! so write more super fast or i'll die of anticapation!!! *more kisses*
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  • From ANON - Citadel on November 15, 2003
    Mmm...Jack in leather on a Harley...THANK YOU SANTA!!! I have to admit, I'm not a big fan of AU's but I read the description and just had to read it, well I'm now officially converted to AU's all because of you! What a fabulously original idea, I love it! I can hardly wait for the dependant/provider aka-hostage/kidnapper chemistery to start. Go ahead Jack, take advantage of our innocent little William all ripe for corruption! Mwa ha ha ha ha-ahem, (clears throat) that is to say, um...keep of the good work, can't wait for more. Years of Cheers, Thanks a Ton, Citadel!
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  • From ANON - RosePwtal2001 on November 14, 2003
    I like this one to. I love AUs they make a story that mucch ich interresting and I like how you are portraying the charicters here except for gibbs I hope Jack beats the s*** out of him. So please up date sorry and sorry about any misspelled words.
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  • From ANON - Mahie Sparrow on November 14, 2003
    Hi Lydia!!!
    It's great!! Can't wait to read more! Hope Will and Jack get together soon! I loved when Jack saved Will from that damned coach. Just to point a gun at his head...lol...but I'm willing to see how they are going to fall in love,I'm curious! Maybe they will have to do something about Gibbs,right? He's so bad! :P Hope he doesn't rape Will too. :(
    Thanks thanks for posting! Cheers,Mahie
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  • From ANON - Foresworn on November 10, 2003
    Hi!

    Cool beginnig, haha ur Elizabeth is so cute, haha like the idea of her in braids, haha very different frm t cool, composed elegant image in the movies. Ohhh...evil Gibbs, this I got to see, you got to tell us more why Gibbs wants Will so much. Poor Will date raped and his first time too, cant wait to see how things unfold, esp the kidnapping part. You go Gal! And cwaitwait to see more of Jack in action! :D the Pearl bike was a nice touch certainly could see it standing for freedom :D
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