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Reviews for Leave Me Lying Here

By : lostmarbles
  • From ANON - Morlwen on December 23, 2003
    Holy shit, again, I love this story so much, I look forward to your updates, and I love all the LOTR's stuff ( me being a big fan) this fic is the best, when do they hook up though?
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  • From ANON - Raffie on December 23, 2003
    Squueeee, they're so sweet!! I love that they're beginning to get along.... Really great chapter, as always... and the references to LOTR, LOL... Good idea ;)! Thank you again!
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  • From ANON - dark vampire on December 23, 2003
    ahhhhh!!!! so damn sexy!! jack is sooo sexy and 'nice' and cool and wonderful!!!! yeah!!! will is all adorable and sweet and innocent! poor baby!!! *huggles* but jack is taking good care of him!!! *cheers* thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! i love this fic sooo much! and i can't wait until jack and will get together!! they are sooo perrrrfect for each other, now that jack it becoming such a good person!!! *glomp* i love you!!!! *kisses* please write more soon!!!! *more kisses*
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  • From ANON - Ibonekoen on December 21, 2003
    Oooooooh, I am most intrigued. I can't wait to see where this goes, and my gosh, poor Will! *huggles him* Wow, you're very good at conveying emotions in your scenes.
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  • From ANON - JackSparrowsWhore on December 21, 2003
    I LOVE IT! You have to write more! Poor destressed little William! Also was very delighted with reference to IHOP....mmmmm fat.....hmm what? oh yes good job! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Kara on December 20, 2003
    Hey! I just wanted to say this is the best POTC fan fic I've read in a long time. Can we get some Elizabeth/Ana Maria though? ;) Elizabeth has to get some action ya know! :) I really love your story! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2003
    oh my, i know i am lazy to review, sol inl in one, it´s just wonderful!!!!! hope to read the next chapter soon and that the relationship between those two becomes better!!
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  • From ANON - s*j on December 18, 2003
    brilliant update! a few days of waiting seems like years to me!
    its really funny when will says to jack tt jack is is father! wat a violent daddy! god helps will!!!
    n dun dun leave it hanging there.. how long do i haf to wait for another updates? :)
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  • From ANON - MahieSparrow on December 18, 2003
    Hi luv! Thanks for updating sooner! I love this fic!!!! I'm so sorry for Will. Poor baby. :( I was reading one of the reviews and I agree with whoever wrote that. Jack could show a little care for Will,as it's obvious he likes the boy and he's soft. :) Can't wait to see Jack softening more...I love that...something that starts with hatred and fear and then become love. :) I can't wait to see them really in love with one another. :) And yeah,you better update soon 'cause we want to know what the heck Jack's father has done. ^_^
    Hope you had a great time yesterday with ROTK! :))) Luv and kisses,Mahie
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  • From ANON - SilverYaoi on December 18, 2003
    This just gtting beter and better!! LOL!! Please update soooonnnnn!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jack4Turner on December 17, 2003
    You made my whole day....well your new chapter and the fact that I got to ROTK really but still i was very pleased to see that you had posted an other chapter...I'm really really enjoying this fic....along with all your other ones. Glad to see that Jack tried to feed Will, sad though how they didn't actually get to eat any of it...poor Willy must still be hungry....
    And whats this about Jack's father was he abusive???? Does Jack have a home somewhere???? You should make him take Will there....that is if he does... I love the angst in this story but I really want the romance to start happening too!!! Please post more soon....savvy?

    J4T

    :)
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  • From ANON - Edward Uwnhai Silverfang on December 17, 2003
    Lol, IHOP is definitely wide spread, from California to Florida. It’s one of my favorite restaurant and I remembettintting the Rooty Tooty Fresh and Fruity meal many times…yummy *drools*. Anyways, very good and I cannot wait till you update, god this is an exciting tale, I don’t know WHY I didn’t start reading this till today!

    Luv, Edward Uwnhai Silverfang
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  • From ANON - someweirdchick on December 17, 2003
    AHH! You updated!! My hope is restored!!!..... ok, enough of that crap, this was a really good chapter! I was laughing pretty hard at the whole "Will is mute and dumb" stuff. Poor Will! New chapter please! Pretty Please? *gives puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - Ume on December 17, 2003
    This is fantastic. Two gorgeous guys and a bike, who could ask for more? Will is soooo sweet, and Jack's 'flashback' was brilliant, can't wait to see how their relationship shapes up. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - morelwen on December 16, 2003
    I couldn't stop laughing, I liked the car part, and Jack and will *squeels in delight*
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