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By : lostmarbles

From ANON - rach on January 02, 2004
This fic just gets better i hope its updated soon and jack and will get it on. But the lotrs stuff goes is confusing i'll have to watch the films.
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From ANON - JackSparrowsWhore on January 02, 2004
You need to write more! FAST NOW! goooooooooo! lol when i saw Tommy Bombadils song i just flipped right out over a chair and onto a cat! stupid arwen taking all of glorfindels credit. omg will must look ADORABLE! =^.^= i love it i love it! man i am checking every 15 minutes to see if you updated, eeeeeeeeeeeeeee! lol *hyper*
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From ANON - Ume on January 02, 2004
Warning - major gushing ahead....Thank you for struggling with the computer gremlins to bring your fans another brilliant chappie. I love this fic!!!!! It gets better and better with each new update. The way you are taking your time with the development of their relationship is sooo wonderful and amazing. You've found the perfect blend of sweetness, sexiness and angst. Favorite moment - Jack flushing Will's Tom B soap sculpture, my first LOL fan fic moment of the new year. Already desperate for your next chapter - update soon - PLEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - ButterBalls on January 02, 2004
Have I mentioned that I love you? *bats eyelashes* BLOODY FINALLY! SOME SLASH! Granted, it's just a fantasy, but still...any smut's good smut.
Poor Jack. Evil Barbossa. Stupid Will. (For not jumping Jack the second he saw him, I mean :p How could he resist?)
And YAY! Someone else who hates Arwen and wishes Glorfy were in FOTR instead! (I love Tom Bombadil, but quite frankly, those yellow boots on screen would've been painful. That and he'd probably scare small children. Hell, he scares me.) *stabs Liv Tyler* DIEDIEDIEDIE!

I'm okay.

You made my day with this chapter, you really did, because I've had one too many (okay...five too many) cups of tea and I'm not feeling that flash. Still waiting for Will to warm up to Jack...but I'm sure he will...because if he doesn't, I may have to *coughkillyoucough* do something about it :p

Once again, fantastic work. Just how long is this story going to be?

PS. Laptops are bloody horrible things. I have one myself and it's a truly useless piece of shite. I was writing an Orlando/Heath Ledger RPS to pass the time while I've got Shackles Block and it won't load anymore. *is upset* Oh, and I've lost the disk somehow, but that's another story.

Okay. I'm going now :p
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From ANON - dark vampire on January 02, 2004
yeah!!! yet another amazing chapter!! i absolutely love it!! will is sooo adorable!! poor jack!! he had a scary childhood!!! *hugs jack* does this mean we are meeting anamaria soon?! *cheers* she is cool! i hope that jack and will get togther soon!! maybe just a kiss that they both enjoy? *puppy eyes* please...? no matter what happens, i absolutely love you!!! *glomp* thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! *kisses* please write more soon!!!!
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From ANON - Rutaari on January 02, 2004
LMAO! You've done it again, Lydia! That was great! I was cracking up the entire time! I love the Tom Bombadil stuff, that's so great! I used to walk around the house singing that when I was little, my dad taught it to me. And the carving soap! I thought he would don done it with his teeth! And OMG! My sister went to Blockbuster once when I told her to rent me something good, and she came back with Lord of the G-Strings, thinking it was LotR movie! Poor little teenage mind! What's worse is that I never saw what she rented, she just stuck it in there and I started screaming when I saw people in g-strings! LMFAO! It was great! Anyway,I can't wait till the next chappie! Lets get some Jack/Will going on soon!
Peace, joy, and hot sexy pirates!
Rutaari
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From ANON - NEWENIT on January 02, 2004
Oh Lydia, this was so hilarious...you never cease to amaze me with your imagination and what you have done with these characters...it is bloody brilliant....i loved this part right here, it had me laughing....
WhatWhat did you do to my head?! I look like a gay vampire reject!� He touched his hair and felt like crying. �You turned me into a fweak just like you!�

gay vampire reject? oh god that is hilarious.....

I can't wait to see what's next, and I'll be glad as hell when Jack seduces Will...geez am I bad or what???

NEWENIT
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From ANON - valleh on January 01, 2004
I LOVE IT!!!! for the love of god new chapter please im going to die if i dont find out what happens next!!!!..... this is worse than a tv to be continued cause...... CAUSE THIS IS GOOD!!!!!!! for the love of everything that is good please a new chapter.... ok high strung aint i lol
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From ANON - JackSparrowsWhore on December 31, 2003
Yay! more greatness! lol, i just skipped through 3 pages of fics to find this! update soon! i love the tlotr refrences, and even though I'm prolly like a 'respect theks aks and tolkien' freak, Jack is right. The movies are all about Aragorn getting it on with Legolas. lol, if lord of the rings exists in your little world, does Pirates of the Caribbean exist too? cuz that would be some fun-kay shit! lol. So now I'm sort of just rambling on. To sum up:
JACK=HOT
WILL=ADORABLE
UPDATE=SOON!

lol keep it up! =^.^=
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From ANON - Violet Bunny on December 30, 2003
Oh My Gosh!!! I love this fic sooooooo much. You have to totally update it soon. This is the first Pirates of the Carribean AU fic I've read, and I love it immensely. I like the way you characterized Jack and Will. When is Will going to start liking Jack? Oh Come on *whines pathetically* More more more!!!!! I wanna know what happens next. You are doing a wonderful job at this fic. LOTR Rocks!!!
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From ANON - disgruntledfox on December 30, 2003
hey!

I really enjoy your story, keep it up! I love the AU Jack and Will is just too cute to be true; I want to ravish him myself. Do you need a beta? I'd be happy to fill in if you do... I would like to help become a part of this wonderful fic. Again, keep up the good work, update soon, and mail me if you want me to be your beta.

~df~
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From ANON - Carmela on December 29, 2003
OMG!!!
We are all aching for more!!!
Update, te, te, update...
Please, please...
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From ANON - Mahie Sparrow on December 24, 2003
That was priceless!!! Jack being so nice to Will,"Lord of the Cock Rings" MWAHAHWHUAMWA...I loved this chapter!!!! It's so funny when Jack starts slashing the LOTR characters!!! And it was so cute that they are becoming kind of friends. I loved this! I found it particularly interesting because *I* went to see LOTR - FOTR the extended version at the movies yesterday. When I got home,there was the ninth part of this fic with Jack and Will watching FOTR the extended version! Weird...very weird. :) Oh,Gods I can't wait to see ROTK!!! By the way,Lydia,hope you have a nice Christmas!!! Thanks for updating sooner again! Can't wait to read next chapter now that Jack is nicer to W :) :)
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From ANON - ButterBalls on December 24, 2003
Thank ye thank ye thank ye! Just in time for Christmas ^_^ LMAO @ Jack's pizza conspiracy theory. Still gagging for the slash...but I'll just trust that you'll chuck it in when the time is right.
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From ANON - kami anya on December 24, 2003
I haven't actually finished the fic yet...but had to review. Do you realize how rare it is to find someone who is interested in all the same things as you and who also writes good fanfiction? Anime, Voltaire (I just got the CD with "Vampire Club" on it today, although I've had it for ages on a mix my friend made me), lotr, grim adventures of billy and mandy, um...there was more to it than that, but I can't remember what now.
Anyways, wh men mentioned the fact this fic is good, I meant REALLY good. For ages now, whenever I read a fic, I've found myself editting it. In this one, I haven't found one thing that needs changing. And the characters are well done.
You know, I'm really glad I got the "Pirates of the Caribean" (sp? I know I spelled something wrong, but it's 2:00 am....) DVD today...as I was watching all the special features (I'm saving the movie itself for tomorrow, as well as my new "The Two Towers" LotR DVD), it occured to me what a great couple Jack and will would make. And being the yaoi fan I am, I came to this section, found your fic, started reading.....And only stopped in order to write this review before I forgot all I wanted to say.
^^
back to reading chapter 7! yay!
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