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Reviews for Leave Me Lying Here

By : lostmarbles
  • From ANON - Lara on January 10, 2004
    interesting...things really started to develop with J/W (yay). it was sudden, but cute and believable. you've done great character development, and i can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! post soon...
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  • From ANON - Raffie on January 10, 2004
    Waaaaaaaaa! *___________*
    My favourite chapter!!!! I love you LOL! Amazing.... really... no words :)
    Have a nice weekend :*
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  • From ANON - Night on January 10, 2004
    Yay!!! An update! Woo Hoo!!! And I am definitone one of the Jebus users in the world! My favorite expression!! I like the story a lot!! Poor will, Swann's a jackass! Keep going! Lets see some more!!
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  • From ANON - ButterBalls (too lazy to sign in) on January 09, 2004
    *does a 100th-review jig*

    Awww @ all the Will angst. Loving it, really I am...LMAO @ Gilbert Grape. Very clever of you :p It's good to see Jack really does have a heart and it *finally* looks like Will might eventually warm up to him. Just how many chapters is this thing going to be?

    PS. Can't think of any other ways to get feedback?! You don't call 100 reviews feedback? :p
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  • From ANON - Violet Bunny on January 09, 2004
    This story is going so freakin' great. I love it. Finally, it looks like there is hope now between them. I loved the parts when Will holds onto Jack for emotional support. Beautiul. Now, hurry up and post more chappies. *Huggles* ^_^
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  • From ANON - disgruntledfox on January 09, 2004
    exellent as always. Jack was wonderful and confused in this one... it was sweet. I'm glad we finally got the rape out in the open. I mean, jack needed to know soon... ohhhhhh, and submissive Will? YUM!


    ~df~
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  • From ANON - Ume on January 09, 2004
    Thank you for this totally brilliant kick-ass chapter!!!!!!!!!! Jack's conflict over how honorable he's being with Will is hysterical...and I just loved the post-melt down interaction between tho ofo of them...seduction, crying, cuddling...oooohhh...Will's sooooo cute when he's having mood swings - can't wait to see what's going to happen now that Jack's taken little Will-bear under his wing. I'm completely psyched for your next update. You rock Lydia!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sarryn on January 09, 2004
    Quite entertaining! Good job.
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  • From ANON - avril on January 09, 2004
    one of the most entertaining stories ever! loved that 'pregnant-lady-on-estrogene', great one. plus - i love bikers, the freedom you feel while going 80mph...
    :) keep writing i put your story in my recs!
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  • From ANON - Dani on January 08, 2004
    It's such an interesting plot and so beautiful written....I eagerly await each new chapter! Please write on Lydia and Thank you!
    *still sniffing because of Will and his "so called" father*
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  • From ANON - dark vampire on January 07, 2004
    ahh!! that was a really awesome chappie!! poor will!!! he is so abused and adorable, but jack will make him feel better!! *cheers* thank you sooo much! you're the best!! please please please write more sooN!!! *glomp* i love you!!! *kisses*
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  • From ANON - disgruntledfox on January 07, 2004
    fabulous as always! Wonderful, yet slightly depressing. Hmmm, can we get to the sex now? Anywho, I was a bit confused about how at the beginning the gang called him a faggot and then the second time, they wanted to rape him. Are they just hypocrites? Anyway, keep up the good work and update soon.

    ~df~
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  • From FainpatheElanesse on January 06, 2004
    squee!!!!!! so so so so so good! Brave!Jack to the rescue once again! and annamaria puking her guts out - lol! ok, babbling now. keep up the good work girlie! Oh, and also, pathetically, can I appeal to people to read/review my fic? it's my very first fic ever, so i'm kinda nervous/want to know how crap it is! it's a songfic called 'Wherever You Will Go' ta muchly! mwah!

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    pointy-eared elf princeling shagger
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  • From ANON - Ume on January 06, 2004
    Thanks - your fab update made my day!!!! Loved Ana, hated Gov Swann, and as always swooned over Jack and his hog....and poor Will all soaked and weepy *sigh* LUV the angst! This just continues to get better with each new chappie - the only problem is I'm desperate for more - please - please - please update sooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - someweirdchick on January 06, 2004
    “I… I don’t have a home… I have nothing… I’m alone… completely alone.”....... *sobs* That chapter was all sad and angsty!! Jack obviously need to 'comfort' Will. *rapidly moves eyebrows up and down* New chapter PLEASE!!! I want it NOW!!!! (Ugh, I HATED that chick.)
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