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Reviews for Leave Me Lying Here

By : lostmarbles
  • From ANON - JacksparrowsWhore on January 16, 2004
    eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I love this fic so very very much! you must continue it forEVER. lol that prolly won't happeut aut at least update soon! It's so very very fabbity! And angsty (*sob*) and funny (heehee) and sexy (ow-ow!) lol sorry can't help it. Good job Update SOon!
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  • From ANON - FainpatheElanesse on January 16, 2004
    gah! and again! GAH! no stopping, woman! get thee back to thy computer now! wow..........goood stuff, Lydia!!!! can i have your muse? :P lol! LOVing babbling!Jack! he's so cute! with the nakedness and thrminrming......gah yet again. keep it up! the work i mean, not Jack....although that would be good too! *eg*
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  • From ANON - Cashiel on January 16, 2004
    You're evil, but I guess you knew that already...
    This story just keeps getting better and better with every chapter. I absolutely love the way you're writing Jack, all confused and uncomfortable. It's so real I have no trouble picturing it, for which I thank you oh so very much. *g*
    Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - MahieSparrow on January 16, 2004
    This chapter was so great!!!!!! How can you end it like this??? Anyway I'm happy because they are going to make love!!!! So cute! :) I love the way Jack is taking care of Will,and I think Will noticed Jack didn't want him to go home because he would miss Will,also,didn't he? And he not Jac Jack desires him too...oh,really cute! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!! I liked also that the press found out about the kidnapping...it's more exciting this way! Will and Jack running from the cops and having sex hidden somewhere! LOL
    Thanks for sharing! Mahie
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  • From Sarryn on January 16, 2004
    Poor confused, emotionally distraught Will. I continue to find myself most eager to read more. Excellent story!
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  • From ANON - falcon on January 16, 2004
    You are absolutely TWISTED to leave a cliffhanger like that! Pure evil, I say!!!

    Keep it up, hun! Love the story! Better finish it or you'll have an angry mob on your hands *L*.


    Falcon
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  • From ANON - ElvenEyes on January 16, 2004

    *gapes*

    *eeps!*

    *faints*

    Jack: *sighs and picks up Elven's slight frame to dump her on the couch*

    Will: *helps Jack*

    Jack: *crosses arms over chest* You damn near killed her, Lydia...

    Will: *nods in agreement* She's just fainted, is all, Jack.

    Jack: *shrugs and throws a pillow at the prone Elven*

    Will: *snorts as Elven bolts awake*

    Elven: *stirring awake* Is it over?

    Jack: Aye, lass.

    Elven: *cries* BUT WHY!?!?

    Will: *gags her*

    Elven: -(*muffled*)- Bloody bastard! *sulks*

    Jack: What she wants to say to you, since she's -(*makes vague gesture to indicate Elven, who scowls*)- you know...she wants to say that she loved it and is trying very hard not to--hey!

    Elven: *freezes when Jack and Will look at her* -(*muffled*)- Wha'?

    Will: *narrows eyes and snatches the remains of a pillow, blowing some feathers out of his hair* This is ~not~ productive, Elven.

    Elven: *points to pillow* 'Tis the only way to rid me of me frustration, is all.

    Jack: *sighs and shoves her into other room, locking the door*

    She wants to say that she LOVES IT AND WANTS YOU TO UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU FREAKIN' CAN!!!

    Will: *gags Jack*

    Jack: *grins through gag* -(*muffled*)- Wha's after this part, eh Will?

    Will: *rolls eyes and sits down to finish review* Thank you kindly. Elven wants you to update soon, and she loves the story. And the slashiness (hopefully!) to come. *turns to Jack* Satisfied?

    Jack: *shakes head and tackles Will to the ground, immediately starting to feel him up*

    Will: *sighs and submits to Jack's onslaught*

    UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! I LOVE SLASHINESS!!!!

    Elven

    P.S. Poor Will! Jack -(*turns to Jack*)- Make him feel better! And do it properly! *giggles*

    ^V^V^V^V^V^V^V^V^V^

    Oh crap. You're going to try and cheer me up, aren't you?
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  • From ANON - alanna on January 16, 2004
    BITCH !!!!!! I HATE YOU.
    no wait I'm sorry I love you.
    You're wonderful and talented and a true gift of the goddess to the art of literature!!!!!!
    pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzz update like now.
    OR I WILL FIND YOU !!!!!
    p.s. not crazy i swear just really love this story and really hate cliffhangers. honest.
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  • From ANON - ssjgoddesshico on January 16, 2004
    Wow! This is os great ^.^ I love it! I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - someweirdchick on January 16, 2004
    That chapter was GREAT!!! and I bet the next one will be even better. (Do ho ho) Oh, oh, OH! you HAVE to update soon... like now!............ or now?............. maybe now?...... (goes on and on)
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  • From ANON - Kris on January 13, 2004
    this story is great!! i lurve it!! poor will tho.... o well. jackll make it all better!!
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  • From ANON - Carmela on January 12, 2004
    That's just too much for me... PERFECT Chapter, I wouldn't change a dot... I liked it even more than number eight (I think it was number eight, the one in which Jack was about to take Will). But it was even better, so hot atilltill so touching and tender... Your AU has become totally complete and independent, I wish there would be a real filsed sed on it!! Work hard, go on writing (but don't forget about Wolf in Sheep's Clothing... I like this little smutty fic a lot!).
    Love,
    Carmela

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  • From ANON - disgruntledfox on January 11, 2004
    gah! The third time I've read it and itjustjust as good as the first! In my opinion, this was the best chappie you've written. hmmmm. now i think I'll go read it again... *lumbers off in the general direction of chappie 14*


    ~df~
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  • From ANON - YaHi on January 11, 2004
    Uwaaa!!!!! Beautiful! I just read the entire thing to Chapter...er...well I bloody forgot but who gives a fucking damn? I love this story! Please continue! It's so rare to see a really well-done AU...and I really wanna see how Jack finally gets Will [consensually] in the sack. (heh heh that rhymes) I like the long chapters and so just update soon pretty pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssseeeeee???????
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  • From ANON - dark vampire on January 10, 2004
    cute!!! jake is being sooooo sweet and wonderful and loving!!! *cheers* he is protecting will and being all adorably loving and helpful and embarrassed!!!! he is the best!! i like the gilbert grape card!!! *grin* you're too smooth for me!! that was awesome!! i love you!!! this is an awesome fic!! thank you so much for always updating and being such a super duper perrrrfect writer!! *glomp* i love you sooooo much!!!! *kisses* thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! *huggles* please write more soon!!!
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