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Reviews for Leave Me Lying Here

By : lostmarbles
  • From ANON - Ume on January 22, 2004
    Squee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jack/Wiltiontion - whoo hoo - loved it. Will-bear is still too cute for words and Jack is just an old softy...well not all of him. Waiting for their adventures now that they're ready to hit the road and yay! you brought back Liz! No pressure but...post again soon please!
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  • From ANON - cath on January 22, 2004
    Great, next chapter soon please.
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  • From ANON - Carmela on January 22, 2004
    GOD BLESS YOU, LYDIA! Wow! Great, great chapter! Actually, I still haven't finished reading it, but I have to say it's lovely! I find it frustrating that our favorite guys didn't make love, but I think it's better like that, more believable. Besides, it means they **will** make love for the first time in some next chapter, and I am sure the wait will be worth of it... Seriously, you wrote the whole love scene in such a tender, yet realistic way! It is nor dirty, nor sappy, and very, very touching... I am hooked on this fic, and since I began to read it, I have learned a lot of English (not my first language, I told you), especially very interesting words, like "nookie", which I didn't know and I will definitely add to my english vocabulary (and I hope I will have to use it a lot, hahaha!) Thanks, Lydia, honestly. And update soon, please!! There is a little smutty spanish girl eager for improving her English...
    Love,
    Carmela.
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  • From ANON - Kris on January 22, 2004
    im glad u got it out now! Jack and will r u kno, and eliza is is up and goin. so now everything is gearin up for something spectacular! ... right ... ? and liz is gonna met annamaria aint she? soon? and then everything will work out. ... right ... ?

    good. glad we got that clear.

    update? soon? little bit of a cliffie there.. not much but hey!
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  • From ANON - wintermoondancer on January 22, 2004
    I am so sorry that I didn't thank you immediately for the last chapter. My internet service was messed up for a few days. Anyway... I really like both of them. It's so sweet that Will make Jack go kind of mushy. I like dangerous Jack, but I also like when he sweet side gets out. I thought the sex was good. It seemed more realistic than if you had them just go at it full tilt. Kudos to you my love. You are a GENIUS!
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  • From ANON - Rubyservantofeli on January 22, 2004
    Well they never actually made love but I bet your saving the good stuff for later chapters ne?
    I liked it :D
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  • From ANON - Quidditchbitch on January 22, 2004
    Awwwwwww! *glomp* I LOVE YOU! YOU DID IT! And it was sooooooo sweet. I'll be gushing over this chapter for a while 'cause you rock. (Even Will is a bit of a sissy.)
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  • From ANON - Night on January 22, 2004
    Woo hoooo!!!! An update!! Yippee!! That just made my day! Hey don't stop now, you're on a role! I like how you brought Liz back in, but will she meet up with Will or will she be intercepted by Barbossa! Hey we like Jack and Will together, their too cute!!! Keep writing!! Getting really interesting! :P Please!!!
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  • From ANON - Sarryn on January 22, 2004
    Very nice. Please write more soon!
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  • From ANON - someweirdchick on January 22, 2004
    AAHHH!!! Ok, everyone, lets sing together: "Jack-and-Will-smut" *clap, clap, clap-clap-clap!!!* Oh! OOHH! You knew they'd be gettin it on at some point!! woo woo! *crickets* I get way too excited about slash fics... but there is nothing wrong with that!!! This chapter was so adorable!!! I had my doubts if they were REALLY gunna do it, but ye was wrong! I can so picture Will being all shy and adorable and blushing and.... everything! do ho ho...
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  • From ANON - dark vampire on January 21, 2004
    OMG!!! yeah!!! finally some loooooove action!!! it was so sweet and wonderful and perect!ect!! you are awesome! i absolutely love you!!!! you're the best! no! better than the best!!! you are just too cool and lovely and wonderfully amazing for words!! *glomp* i love you!!! *kisses* thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!! and now lizzie's gonna' have her own adventure and she and ana maria are going to get together!! *cheers* this is soooooo exciting!!! *more kisses* thank you again!!!! *huggles* please write more soon!!!! i luv luv luv luv luv you!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Morelwen on January 20, 2004
    I HATE YOU! WHY GOD WHY HAST THOU DEPRIVETH ME OF YAOI?!!!!!!!! I hat5e you you evil evil person! next chapter better hae some Will and jack lovin' or I might go chronicaly unsane!
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  • From ANON - Night on January 19, 2004
    Well, i must say, you know how to make the cliffs extremely high, and extremely steep!! Dang nab it!!! I really hope you finish it soon, or at least add on!! Poor Will, the guy's been through way too much! Jack's too cool, and Swann'serk!erk!!! Make it all happy soon, Will cannot go back with swann and Barbossa can not get a hold of Lizzie or Will!!! Please!! Write, write, write till you cannot write anymore!! (Preferably when the story's done)

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  • From ANON - Glorry on January 19, 2004
    Oh my Farf how can you STOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP have you gone crazy ?_?
    Pleas pleas write more I want wo know how the story goes from here.
    Oh my I really really like thies story ^____^
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  • From ANON - cay on January 19, 2004
    I do hate you. Can't you put that chapter up now i've been waiting for ages, usually i woudn,t read on if their was no action early on. Update soon (please)
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