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Reviews for Leave Me Lying Here

By : lostmarbles
  • From berkie88 on July 07, 2007
    .... complicated.... how are you going to fix this? the cops will have one hell of a time trying to sort out who did what... and then there are the people with records (what will happen to them?) and people like Barbossa with the conflicting statements... and where are Lizzie and the rest?

    but you did say there will be a sequel so I have hopes for a happy ending... you will make it a happy ending right?

    love all the references to other films and series they've been in! (I thought the Peter Drinkwater one was rather unknown actually. I only knew of it because I watch that series). and thanks for all the #. some I knew of but others...
    and sometimes with the way you write it I can really see the Jack Sparrow from the movie walking around... with the hand flapping and all...
    is he going to continue the precious thing he got from LotR? I rather liked the luv thing...

    hope for more soon! it's been a while since the last update...
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  • From BloodyRoseBlack on June 30, 2007
    Oooohh YOU!!!! I can't believe you ended at this point!!! YOU'RE JUST CRUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Will Will live? Will there be a happy ending with lots of snogging??
    Update soon! Pretty please??
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  • From AdenDiction on June 08, 2007
    It stoped....AGAIN! Why do you insist on doing this to me? Poor Will, he's just too damned pretty fro his own good. And Jack, oh Jack, the poor man doesn't know what to do- poor sexy beast. Where ever did the others go? Will they all make it? Will Jack go to jail? Can Barbosa die a horrid death after being raped by some big guy named Bubba in prison? Is there a happy ending coming in the next 2 months?

    I'm still absolutely ADORING this story.

    NEVER STOP WRITING (savvy?)

    Aden Diction
    -!-ADDICTION-!-
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  • From Shadowedsyn on June 06, 2007
    Kyaaa!!! I've been following this story since about half-way, and I just read the whole thing at once today. I'm DYING to know what happens. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update!!! I'm begging you. This is oine of the bst fics I've eer read and I've been reading fics for years. Heh, I'll be sitting in class, and I''ll start wondering what will happen. Please update soon! ...I'll be your best friend!!
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  • From storylover28 on April 10, 2007
    You are EVIL!!!!!!!! ENDING THE CHAPTER THERE!!!!!!!!!!!
    VERY, VERY EVIL!!!!!!!!!!

    PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!! I CAN'T STAND THE SUSPENSE!!!!!
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  • From Jackee on March 21, 2007
    a new chapter!!!

    Loved it! Always nice to see that you intend to finish this fic! :D *gives you cookies*


    I was wondering....have you seen 'Haven' yet? if so, do you think you'll ever get in the mood to write some Haven slash? Hammer/Shy, perhaps? *bribes with more cookies*
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  • From speedie234 on February 20, 2007
    but.. but... that can't be it! more. there has to be more. please?
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  • From ANON - Rachel on January 09, 2007
    Love the story. I couldn't stop reading it. I can't wait to find out what happens with Will. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Alex on January 03, 2007
    Yeah, just so you know, in New York 17 is the legal age for sex. I live in NY, I should know. lol BTW, greath fucking story!
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  • From Jackee on December 26, 2006
    Love this fic so much!!!!!!! xD

    Haven't checked up on this one in a while though, so I had quite a few chapters to go through. ^^; but man....wow... this fic is amazing!!
    Although you should have kept your OC's to a minimum, they were there to provide comic relief and to take care of Elizabeth, but I didn't find them amusing at all. Irritating, more like it. (sorry)

    And although i don't want this fic to end; i can't wait for the sequel.... Norrington/Will is going to blow my mind! xD (here's hoping you'll still do that...lol)


    oh and while i'm still writing... If you ever feel like writing a fic based on PotC 2..... any chance that you might write Davy Jones/Will n/c? *looks at you with big puppy eyes*


    anyways, great fic, can't wait to see what happens next!! :D
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  • From ANON - deathskiss on December 23, 2006
    Wow - has it really been over 2 years since this story started? I'm glad to see you're still updating it - can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - nercomi on December 06, 2006
    GOD I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!! it's an angle no one else has taken for PotC. One very small technicality though, in ch.28 when Jack shoots the chain...this is an ineffective way to break the chain as it moves and has too much give to be shot in the middle. Shooting the ring holding the chin in place however would release the chain and will along with it, and I will now shut up with the techincal crap. Anywho please continue befor the disgusting and visious brainwashing of christmas sucks us in !
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  • From ANON - WolfStar4eva on December 03, 2006
    child, the Hilton (gag) sisters are heirs to a great fortune, and their /daddy/ is a rich old fart.
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  • From ANON - Amber on December 01, 2006
    Hello...I just wanted to let you know that I was sooooooooooo incredibly happy when I saw your update and totally loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one. I look forward to reading more( and re-reading what's already written lol)!!!!! :)!!!

    Thanks,
    Amber Brooke
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  • From ANON - jen07 on November 24, 2006
    YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!! I can't wait to know what happens next. Please update soon!!!
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