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Reviews for Leave Me Lying Here

By : lostmarbles
  • From ANON - MistressofDragons on February 10, 2004
    it's 2 in the morning and i just read this entire story in one sitting. . . not my fault! I just watched the movie like. . . a week ago? yeah that sounds about right. . . anyway i had alot of catching up to do. . . so this review will be a little random and incomplete. . .

    anyway i like it and you are handling thpe wpe well. . . one of my pet peeves is people suddenly having a raped character bounce back and be fine again. . . or worse hardly be affected at all. It don't work that way! It can take years to recover from rape. Talione is two years and counting and still can't let guys touch him. Lucas is going on six months and just had his first kiss without the accompanyianicanic attack. Sora, Kyosuke and Min Dao. . . well they'll never be right. . . Sora and Kyosuke are still in the incestuous comfort sex stage. .. you know the phrase, "kiss it and make it all better"? well it seems to have taken on a whole new meaning with close brothers who have been horribly raped and abused by their dads. . . at least the brothers that reside in my head. . . again i plead the 2 in the morning bit. . . and the names i mentioned? Characters in various fan and original fics of mine. .. most not posted here sadly.. .

    where was i?

    oh yes. . . you mentioned the 'daddy' bit in one of the chapters. . . now Sora makes sense! he always resorted to daddy and now i know why. . . yeah i need sleep and since i seem to be doing very little actual reviewing i'll quit while i'm behind. . . oyasumi nasai. . .

    and continue please. . .
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  • From ANON - Cashiel on February 08, 2004
    I _love_ this story, drinks all around. *g*
    Now let's get more of it...
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  • From ANON - dark vampire on February 07, 2004
    yeah! you finally updated!! it was a wonderful chappie, as always!! and ana maria and liz finally met!! that was awesome! i love the way ana kicked that guys butt!! *cheers* you are the coolest author ever!! i love you!!! se pse please please write more soon!! *kisses* thank you thank you thank you!!! *huggles*
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  • From on February 07, 2004
    Awesome fic. ^^ Jack, that horny bastard! ^^ Can't wait to read more.
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  • From latinereget86 on February 07, 2004
    This is probably one of the best AU stories I've read in a long time. I cant wait to read more so please update soon.
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  • From ANON - SilverScaleSerpent on February 07, 2004
    Update soon! Please! I live for your update!
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  • From ANON - Morelwen on February 06, 2004
    yeay! an update, your so witty with your jokes that I stay laughing the entire time. Keep it up this is good stuff
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  • From ANON - JackSparrowsWhore on February 06, 2004
    FINALLY AN UPDATE! I was actually very worried. but thank all that is good and slashy that you are indeed alive and non of your typing fingers are broken! That's very upsetting that Will wouldn't put on the yummy pants. But, thus is life! I loved it as always, and will again panic until the next chapter.

    Awesomeness!
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  • From ANON - Bammers on February 06, 2004
    Hiya.. Finally, a chapter! Jeez lol Anyways, it was worth the wait. :)
    Love, Bammers (AKA Kelsey)
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  • From on February 06, 2004
    Well definatly different, I mean what a lame-ass excuse 'Role playing'...men
    Loved the chapter Jack' getting very mushy...I LOVE IT!
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  • From ANON - ElfCrow on February 06, 2004
    Love the story so far! A little slow in the making but I understand! With I could write this of of story, but I fear of my parents finding it. i'm only 13 and really shouldn't even be on this site. *anime sweatdrop* Oop's look at the time! I've said to much! See ya!!
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  • From ANON - Kris on February 06, 2004
    YAY!!! good stuff... tired... must go... cheerio!!
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  • From ANON - silverscaleserpent on February 06, 2004
    Yay! You updated! I love you.... *grins* PLEAAAAAAASE update again SOON!

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  • From ANON - Mahie Sparrow on February 06, 2004
    Hey luv! Thanks for updating the fic!!!! I got your e-mail. I'm happy you appreciated mine. :) I'll write you later cause I'm leaving to work right now. Well,just wanted to say I love this chapter as the other ones and that I can't wait till you update again. Will is so spoiled and so cute! LOL Hope Jack takes good care of him. :) And Elizabeth and AnaMaria are going to find them,aren't they? It would be nice,having the two couples riding together! ;) Kisses to you and be well,alright? Mahie
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  • From ANON - ButterBalls...again on February 06, 2004
    Will is *so cute*! And I'm dying for Liz and Anamaria to get together. *CoughandformoreJack/Willsmutcough* But no pressure :D

    Um...great, fantastic, superb, wonderful, etc...

    Don't feel bad about the delay. I'm even worse.
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