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Reviews for Leave Me Lying Here

By : lostmarbles
  • From ANON - ButterBalls on March 10, 2004
    Lydia dear, I am *so jealous* of the fact that you can actually combine smut with plot, because all I can seem to write is freaking PWP. Not that's there's anything wrong with hard sex...but still...

    Go Will on not taking Jack's shit! *claps* It's about time he grew a backbone (of sorts).

    Norri's fully OOC, but that doesn't matter :p It works with the story. Will be very interested to see thinthings progress from here.

    Have I mentioned that I love you lately? *bats eyelashes*
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  • From ANON - Gillian on March 09, 2004
    HOLY CRAP!!! i love this story. jack makes me laugh out loud and will makes me giggle with his off-hand comments. nakey! priceless. and the whole jack's stick thing? grand. i love that you put all of the little notes at the bottom. you are the first author i'vad tad that does that. i read that you are busy and the chapters are now incomplete, but please hurry. you have created an addiction and i can't even give head to get enough money to pay for it. (just kidding) anyway, TYPE, type as fast as you can!
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  • From ANON - magget on February 28, 2004
    i may just have to kill you for stopping there.....EVIL THAT YOU ARE!!!!...update soon, i want to know what happens next...
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2004
    bitch
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  • From ANON - Eci_Frog on February 27, 2004
    You`re crazy! Ending the capther there! I can `t wait to find out what happend to jack and will. Did Jack get hurt? Please don`t say it`s so...
    Another great chapther as always!
    You must never stop writting.
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  • From ANON - ButterBalls on February 27, 2004
    LMAO @ mother-fucking-finally. I absolutely agree :p

    Gruesome twosome…such a perfect way to describe Jack and Will! *snickers some more*

    Um…I honestly don’t know what to say except ‘I love it’ for the bajillionth time. Will’s so wimpy I want to hit him upside the head and scream ‘Snap out of it!’…but then he’d just cry all over my shirt :p It’s okay, though…Wimpy!Will works for this.

    Two words, my dear Lydia: Fuck. School. Slash has top priority! :p

    No, really, I understand…I’ve got the same problem; have to write an essay on Tiberius bloody Gracchus and his reforms fnciencient History and I just failed my first Maths test so I think that’s saying I slash too much. Just don’t do a me and not update for, like, seven weeks :p

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  • From ANON - Demeter on February 25, 2004
    heh... I
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  • From ANON - Morelwen on February 25, 2004
    I love you! This story is the best! More slash more sex!ehehehehehehehehe I'm cruel, and demanding
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  • From ANON - Leigh on February 25, 2004
    First of all, this is a great story. You have sucked me into a human au when I told myself that would never happen.

    Unfortunately the footnotes keep throwing me off. Instead of using brand names, just make up a place. Or just assume the audience knows what you're talking about. Good writing(1) doesn't need footnotes, and footnotes mess up the flow of the story.





    (1)You do have good writing. That's not sarcasm.
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  • From ANON - Kelsey on February 25, 2004
    Jeez Jack says precious a lot. He's starting to sound like Gollum. Muahaha! LoL Update as soon as possible! *huggles*
    Love, Kelsey
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  • From ANON - latinereget86 on February 25, 2004
    No you didn't just leave it right there, for all we know Jack and Will are going to die in the tornado. (j/k) Anyway I wanted to tell you that I just love this story, and that I hope you update really soon cause I want to know if Jack and Will live.
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  • From ANON - Eci_Frog on February 21, 2004
    Please update soon! I just love this story and can`t wait to find out what happens next. And Jack in leather! Hmmmmmmmm.
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  • From ANON - Jessi on February 19, 2004
    Awww, I love this Will so much. *squooshes him* Most of the times I want to shower him with little paper hearts, and then there are those times when I just want to strangle him for being stupid. But that's ok, I don't think I'd fair much better in that type of situation. Blast. Karma. o.< pain. Karma from wanting to strangle your will, it was. *rubs side* I hates the random karma cramps. grumbling loudly I am.

    Anyhoos, wrie more of this soon please, before I feel the need to threaten you with large dead fish in another review and suffer more random karma cramps. I live only several hours away from the ocean, I could do it! I could! Beware! Er, if I could ever find my way there. *stares at map all disgruntled like*

    Lurv,
    Jessi
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  • From ANON - mia g on February 17, 2004
    thanx for the new chappie i really liked the " i look like such a slut" and "we can hear you" quote's those made my day
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  • From ANON - Eci_Frog on February 17, 2004
    Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Don`t you ever stop writing.
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