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Reviews for Leave Me Lying Here

By : lostmarbles
  • From Jack4Turner on April 18, 2004
    Absolutly loved the chapter! Can't wait for the next one! I just love where the story is going. You practically gave me a heart attack when Will answered the door and Norrington was standing there. SO Glad to see that he wasn't really there and it was all just a bad dream! Well anyway keep up the good work! :)
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  • From ANON - Rutaari on April 18, 2004
    Brilliant again, darling. I love what you're doing with this, thought I'm really anxious to see the first feeting of Norrington and Jack. creepy. Ooooh, and that allusion of FotR and Gandalf was fabulous!! Gandalf captured in tower + Will captured in tower= MOTHS!

    Don't worry, love. I happen to work at a zoo in the reptile and insect department. You should see how people look at me when I go raving mad if they try to kill a spider. When I used to be a counselor at a summer camp I got "asked to leave" because one of the kids was about to kill a snake (it was a bull snake! harmless, just really big) and I shoved the kid away (wasn't sposed to do that?) and picked up the snake and walked off talking to it. hehe. Oops.

    Fantastic job.

    Rutaari
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  • From ANON - Gilly on April 18, 2004
    AHHHHHH!!! It can't end THERE! Okay, so it can, but, AHHHHHH! There needs to be more. *sings*Me love you long time!*is done*
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  • From ANON - katie_k on April 18, 2004
    'in large copious globs' - beautiful :)

    ive been reading this fic for ages but this is the first update you've done since i found the reiview button - i know, i really should be blonde. im completely in love with pretty much all of your stories. i love the way you write - your characters are all done so well and and evrything you write, angst/fluff/smut, is amazing. i know i sound like im gus a b a bit, but i just attempted to write my first ever fic today after about two years of reading and its really not as easy as it seemed, so i have loadsa respect for your stuff.

    neways i absoltely adore this story and your killing me with the waits between updates.

    katie_k
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  • From ANON - Gillian on April 05, 2004
    oh, one more thing, in one of the early chapters, will said that his parents' friend always drove a harley. was that friend by any chance jack? just a thought...
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  • From ANON - Gillian on April 05, 2004
    was that it? please don't let that be it!
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  • From ANON - Morelwen on April 01, 2004
    yeay they did it they did it! Woot! Hoobstank is pretty good, I saw them in concert in Febuary along with POD and Linkin Park! when are you going to write this sequal?
    great chappie, update agains soonish
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  • From ANON - WoodofElijah on March 30, 2004
    I love this story. A friend of mine told me to read it after she showed me that picture of Orlando. Little did I know you were the same author of The Price of Rum and Wolf in Sheep’s Clothing two of my favorites on here. Even though you haven't updated Wolf in Sheep’s Clothing in forever. Oh, by the way the title of the song by Hooba Stank is called "The Reason". I have the lyrics to most of their songs if you’d like them. Just e-mail me. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Herald Soucree on March 29, 2004
    *happy sigh* I'm sooo glad you updated. Yve mve made me very happy. And so did Mike, since he helped with the sex. Send him my love.

    But, now it's getting angsty. I'm getting worried. Jack is going to "do something stupid" isn't he? Update and put my fears to rest!
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  • From ANON - MustIBeAMalfoy on March 29, 2004
    So, does that mean this story is almost over then? Aww I hope not! I love it so much! I loved the sex scene. It was very tender and loving, just what poor Willie needed. I also hope that Jack will soon kick Avery's ass. :
    Lov
    Love, Kelsey
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  • From ANON - fainpathe elanesse on March 29, 2004
    ohmygosh

    *THUD*

    *picks self off floor*

    twas was wonderful honey!!!! SMUT AT LAST! PRAISE THE GODDESS! I just love to see my boys getting down and dirty! :P

    This chapter was amazing - very well done to your smutboy, Mike! :P The sex...my god, the sex....guh.

    i swear, i'll write a coh coherent review later - but meanwhiles, WELL DONE!!!!!! keep up the good work, please please please!!!!!

    Fainpathe
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  • From ANON - Mel on March 29, 2004
    i have to admit that i am both surprised and impressed. the level of mature love with Jack and Will is developing hugely (as is the angst). you can really see all their worries and fears, and also their love and affection. i liked how the love scene was VERY unsure; lots of fears of losing each other driving them on. you've really turned them into a great couple (take that, Walt!) from what was a big question mark to me not so long ago. i, naturally, hope they stay together, even if they are not so carefree anymore. also---and this is no rush to add this---when the word "love" comes into play with them, that should be hilarious (and sweet). they hso mso much trouble admitting their feelings to each other...well, i can't wait to see what happens when they get VERBALLY emotional. you've done a great job. you could pry this couple from the page, and you would actually have a realistic couple (oh, goddess, if only!). YAY!!!! moremoremore...
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  • From ANON - ButterBalls again on March 29, 2004
    For the smut, I mean.
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  • From ANON - ButterBalls on March 29, 2004
    Three words:

    IT'S ABOUT TIME!

    :p
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  • From ANON - Glorry on March 27, 2004
    ^__________________________________________^ Oh my Will Turner is high *lol* tse the cutie is really not the smartest eh?
    I mean everybody know that you can get high when you are in a closed room or?
    But real bad is the smell -.-°°°°

    Are the girls in the next chapter or do you forgot them? That would be a real shame the two are so sweet together and I so want to read it when Will and Liz meat again ^______^ I so love happy ends yeah yeah I'm a real s but but hey I'm cute so whats the matter ^^y

    I hope that I doesn't have make too much mistakes to read another language is real easy to write it is a howl other thing *looks real sad*
    I hope you write much more chapters and please *puppy dog eyes* don't write too slowly plleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssee


    By Glorry-chan
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