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By : lostmarbles
  • From on May 17, 2004
    Please write a new chappie soon! Its so good...LOL!
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  • From ANON - rach on May 16, 2004
    hi love your story
    please write more when yove tve time
    rach
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  • From ANON - Jessica D. on May 02, 2004
    Wow... *tis speechless* That was wonderful. I stayed up till 3 in the morning one night reading the first 15 chapters. Then I had to control myself and read the other chapters more slowly. YOU MUST POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!! NOW! Oh, sorry, I get a bit carried away, but yes, I shall be waiting. I'm so glad Gilly told me to read this story. I think you might have emailed her back and forth for a bit. Anyway, it was awsome, I comend you for the help staving off my boredom. Guess I wasn't really that speechless...
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  • From ANON - Sparrow\'s bonnie lass on April 28, 2004
    I love this story! I can't wait till the next chapter comes out. I love Jack in this. You write Jack and Will beautifully. I hope there are many more chapters to come.
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  • From ANON - ButterBalls, making her 23rd appearance as a reviewer :p on April 26, 2004
    Oooo! What a perfect birthday pressie, the updating of one of my favourite fics :D Was slightly disappointed that Will didn't want to shag (okay, I have *got* to read something other than PWP), but 'twas all worth it...Jack's exclamations at the movie had me sniggering aloud, lol!
    And more *jaw drops* at all the action and stuff. *waves flag* More!
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  • From ANON - Gillian on April 25, 2004
    WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.....

    (I'll elaborate later)
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  • From ANON - MustIBeAMalfoy on April 25, 2004
    Whee I loved this chapter! *dances*

    Love, Kelsey

    PS Poor Willy and Jacky! :(
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  • From ANON - glamis on April 25, 2004
    OH WOW!
    I love brand new knows how to get what he wants the Liv tyler way!Will
    and also
    Pathetically easy to manipulate using the Will and sex combination!Jack
    In fact i love them both, except Bo'sun he can rot in hell for hurting Will... Having said that can there be any will/norri non con action...i know i already asked, but i figured i'd bug you untill you gave in soooo... CAN YOU PLEASE PUT NON CON NORRI/WILL!, CAN YOU PLEASE PUT NON CON NORRI/WILL!, CAN YOU PLEEEEEEEEEEASE PUT NON CON NORRI/WILL!PLEEEEEEEEEEASE PUT NON CON NORRI/WILL!
    Oh yeah and can i just say how pleased i am that poor frustrated Jack finally got his rocks off in the last few chapters, i was beginning to fell sorry for the poor guy!
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  • From ANON - katie_k on April 25, 2004
    OMG, you're like the only person i've ever heard of that's seen Empire Records - that film kicks ass!!! lol. neways, another perfect chapter. and really liking will's outfit in this, ooh, and the little goatie. so cute.

    as usual, lovin' it

    katie_k
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  • From ANON - Juushika on April 21, 2004
    It's okay, I talk to moths too. Why, I even had th fth friend once that wouldn't get off my hand no matter what I did, and just sat there licking me, which really tickled. So you're not the only crazy one *pats*. But anyhoo, I always do little dances when I see that you've updated. You have the magical gift of being able to make everything be horribly angsty, yet awfully funny at the same time. Or maybe I'm just sorta sadistic. But update soon! Or I'll... I'll cy! And whine at you! *shakes fist* arrrgh...

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  • From ANON - GLAMIS on April 19, 2004
    oh yeah!!!, BEFORE I FORGET OVER AT THE ORLANDO BLOOM FILES THERE ARE SOME NEW PICTURES OF ORLI IN 'THE FACE'!
    There the ones that were'nt put in the final edition of the magazine...
    Anyway just thought i'd mention it in case you didnt already know, as i know you liked the original ( very sexy!!) pictures, and if i recall were'nt they the base for Wills fetish club look?
    ( that was a good look, Orlando should dress like that all the time...OF COURSE WHEN I TRIED TO EXPLAIN THAT TO HIM!!!...*while i was holding him hostage*,...ALL I GOT WAS A RESTRAINING ORDER;) some people are just SO ungrateful!
    Anyway... if you scroll down on the home page of the obfiles to latest images they should be there...
    unfortunately he is without the eye make up in them:(
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  • From ANON - MistressofDragons on April 19, 2004
    kamikaze. . . the wind of god. . . litterally that's what it means. . . i love Japanese. . . of course kami can also mean hair. . . so written in romanji kamikaze can also mean hair wind! mwahahahahahahahahahahahaha! *cowers* don't attack me with your hair wind! i of of you! see i'm reviewing!
    . . . ah yes. . . i'm in a mood. . . random is all ya going to get from me today. . .
    hmph. . . at least you have reviews. . . and lots of them. . . i ohavehave three reviews for one of my stories, "Hantai no Dekigoto"(means contrary occurences) and only one for "The Knife-Edge" the final instalment in the Edgeilogilogy! woohoo it's almost done. . . but it still only has one reveiw. . .
    . . . don't you love shameless self promotion?
    . . . obscene socks!(don't ask. . . really. . . you probably don't want to know)
    . . .
    one more thing!. . . that there is. . .
    "You've let your doom in by the front door, but it won't depart that way." Mabrook, "The Last Unicorn"
    . . . me loves that quote, not sure if i have it word for word anymore but it gets the idea accross. . .
    . . . been driven mad by the randomness yet?
    . . .
    randomness is good! it's an art i tell you, an art!
    i'll leave you alone now. . .
    ja mata!
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  • From ANON - glamis on April 19, 2004
    THERE'S GOING TO BE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

    That was a nice long che! (e! ( i luv the j/w luv)
    (But when i thought there might be a spider on Wills face that freaked me out little) as i am aspider wuss!
    Anyways, i cant remember if i've reviewed before but i just want to say i love this story!
    I'ts one of my favourites of yours as i think it has just the right balance of angst , and just a teeny bit of fluff, which is how i like it;) as overall i am an angst whore:)
    And Jack/ Will are sooooo in love, i think they're g tog together!
    I really like your characterisation of Will as sort of sweet, and innocent despite everything that's happened to him.
    And that Jack is such a cad, kidnapping him and being all seductive...
    All i can say is, at the risk of sounding rude... that maybe a tiny bit of norri/ will non con might be nice, even if it's just implied... in the future I MEAN, or maybe not, maybe wills' moth will fly into the eye of the bad man with the video camera, an permanently blind him before he speaks to Norrington, that would be fun!!!, and not without irony...
    Anyway all i can say is UPDATE AGAIN AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!
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  • From ANON - ButterBalls on April 19, 2004
    You know I love you, Lydia, and there is absolutely nothing I can say that I haven't said before. Except, as usual, I'm itching to read more...and damn you for that accursed cliffhanger! :p
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  • From ANON - Sarryn on April 19, 2004
    Quite lovely and quite interesting and very exciting. Please do continue!
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