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Reviews for Rules of Engagement

By : Murron
  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2003
    Very interesting. Hehe, it's oddly cute that Jack is ticklish....somehow. Yeah. Anyways,greegree that Will has had more than enough angst.....so therefore you should continue it as pure smut! Hahaha!
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  • From ANON - Kalio on October 13, 2003
    Oh, I like that. Do I ever like that. It's a great Will POV, made all the more enjoyable by my agreement with everything he thinks about Jack. *grin*

    Only thing I want to point out is that I'm not sure the word "fuck" was used as a curse (or, in fact, at all) in that time period. *shrug* No biggie, just thought I'd mention it.

    This is a fantastic Jack/Will you've written, and I'll be hoping for more! :)
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  • From ANON - Fear and Loathing in America on October 13, 2003
    Simply gorgeous... I do believe that I shall either scream or sing the Lambchops song if you don't write a sequel to this. *begins to sing a little to give you a taste* This is the song, this is the song, this is the song that never ends, Yes it goes on and on my friends, Some people, started singing it not knowing what it was, and they'll continue singing it forever just because, this is the song, this is the song, this is the song that n end ends, Yes it goes on and on my friends... *smirks* Can you really bear to here me sing this continuously in the background until you finally give in? For I can quite assure you that I will not cease- not a word, nor a single note shall be left off until you agree to write it.
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  • From on October 13, 2003
    Great story, I really enjoyed reading it! You write with a beautiful style, and captured Will's POV superbly. I agree - I'd like to find out about the rules of engagement in more detail...;). Sweet, thoughtful and really well written *sighs romantically*, congrats! :D
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  • From ANON - Julia on October 12, 2003
    Oh how sweet... you really got Will's POV beautifully, with his mixture of shyness and bravery. Yay for slash and yay for four poster beds. Jack's behaviour and way of speaking are done nicely, too, his story telling and making himself the centre of attention and incidently never having to pay for his drinks... yes, very Captain Sparrow.

    I think the way Will gets up the courage to make is move is done nicely, too: going as far as he can without being noticed at first and then make the final little step to being noticed - it fits in with first time shyness, but also with Will's way of doing what needs to be done.

    So, great fic, thumbs up, five stars, and I'm looking forward to the next cer. er. Is Will going to learn what _exactly_ those Rules of Engagement are? (First one to touch the other gets to be owned?)
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  • From ANON - watashi on October 12, 2003
    I like this. Jack isn't completely depraved and Will isn't completely clueless. More, please?
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