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Reviews for Happily Ever After

By : Moonshade
  • From ANON - Bammers on January 31, 2004
    Hiya! I read your stuff on ff.net and came here for your other story. This story, as well as all of your stories, is awesome! We need a sequel! :)
    Lotsa love, Bammers
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  • From ANON - Jo on December 21, 2003
    Wow. Great work!! Loved it. The best Jack/Will story I have come across so far.
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  • From ANON - TheCheekyPirate on December 06, 2003
    That was wonderful! I feel everything came out good in this, Spiritually, Ecumenically, Sexually...yep. Veryyy good. With lots of wet sexy pirates and cute little sexy whelps. My complements to you who cooked up this little, hot, bothering, and tingley Fic. *bows* Your a very good writer, keep up the good work! Oh, yes and don't forget to drink your rum!! It's part of a balanced diet!!
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  • From ANON - Mistress Alistra on November 06, 2003
    Waaaaaaaaaaahhh!
    I LOVED it! And you know what I actually found funniest? The explanation that you wrote the last piece
    at a party. Because I write my stuff mostly when I'm out somewhere, too, whether it's on the subway or
    yes, drunk at a party.
    I read a lot of PotC Jack/Will, but this is definitely one of my favourites. Keep writing, dear, keep writing.
    *sighs* I need to see that movie again, 3 times' just not enough. :)
    Hugs and thanks,
    Alistra
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  • From ANON - LelianeMirelen on November 02, 2003
    Wow, that was THE most incredible Jack/Will fic I've ever read. WOW!!!! You are now one of my fave authorHANKHANK YOU and write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Flossie on October 20, 2003
    Well, Miss JackSparrowsWhore, I've just read all of your story and it was brilliant! Lots of hu and and teasing! I couldn't wait to read the next and the next chapters. Please do some more.......pretty please with cherries on.......ooh, hang on, there's an idea!!
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  • From ANON - Stina on October 13, 2003
    Wow, wow, wow.... What a story, like it a loooooot!! Will, so innocent, and Jack, every inch the pirate *g*. Very naughty, very sexy - fantastic!!!
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  • From ANON - Grey Elven-Eyes on October 09, 2003

    *sweatdrop* I know what you mean by the 'insecurity issues'. *sigh* It's just kinda weird when you write smut down, huh? *snicker* It can stay in your head and drive you insane, but when you want to get it out and keep it down on paper, it just doesn't feel comfortable. BAH! I had the same damn problem!!! *grr*

    I like this story!!! You seem to be doing well on the smut so far, so just continue the way you're going and it should be fineiggliggles* Jack's so...experienced with his mouth. I love it!

    Toodles! (*snicker* 'Toodles'? The hell?)

    Elven
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  • From ANON - Queen of Vegetasei on October 09, 2003
    It's good for a first try, and I'm impressed. But, it's my duty to point out some phrases that just sounded weird:

    "Will’s eyes were streaming tears as he curled his hands into the pirates dreadlocks."

    Um...why is he crying? It doesn't hurt as far as I know, and Will is not THAT emotional right? You make it sound like he's in pain when he can't. Blow jobs are all good, when they actually get to penetration, THEN he can cry.

    “his skin exploded as he reached his climax."
    in..in...exploded? What? That sounds odd and brings odd visual imagery. Change it to HE exploded, or something of the like, not his skin.

    Everything else was super. Love this story, even the slighfem fem Will. Can't wait for more... Though I suggest you read some more NC-17 slash just to get the terminology right.
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  • From ANON - Napoleon lover on October 09, 2003
    NYOOOOOOOOO!!!! How the HELL could you end it there!! you ARE a bitch!! *glomps on to leg and pets thigh* But I still love you...cause you write the dirty smutty storys, that I need to live... *smiles* More...please?
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  • From ANON - Alex-chan on October 05, 2003
    ..dun..dun nearly pushed the review button before writing something ...*hits her head*
    ^_^ this fic rocked !
    I really liked the way you made the characters ..especially Jack who is totally in character .. just as funny and unreadable.. anyway,
    I'll be waiting for the next update (hope it won't be long ^^;)
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  • From ANON - Lennoy on October 02, 2003
    *deep contented sigh*
    This is the first PotC slash fic I have come across (I'm betraying my friends in doing so, I told them I wouldn't go into *another* fandom-ish world with slash slash galore! ^_^) andI'm glad I found this one first. Yipee!!! Tis a great story, lots of fun, and I even like reading your author's notes >P Heheh.. can't wait for more *cough* stuff *cough* But, I can give you no suggestions, as I am a completely unexperienced smut writer, but, as a reader heheheh ^_^' Anyway, your is a great fic, I wanna read more! You have all these good circumstances worked out, and poor Will *pats on head* But JACK *has trouble breathing, wants to pounce on him and do some naughty things*
    Ahem. Anyway, I believe I am well on the way to having an obsession with PotC ^_^ Haven't had an obsession for a while, buyt anyway ^_^ Please please please conitnue!! Only a couple more chapters of it left? :( :( Oh well....
    thank yeee
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  • From ANON - DarkBubbleGum on October 02, 2003
    YEAY SMUT!
    Great chapter! Well done!
    I love how unsure Will is of his feelings, and how totally calm Jack is being while Will;s losing his mind!
    GREAT!
    Luv ya!
    Keep going!
    Hurry up with the smut!
    PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Grey Elven-Eyes on October 01, 2003

    *gapes* O__O

    HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT THERE?!?!? Please please PLEASE put lots and lots of smut in the next chappie, savvy? I need more JackWill smut! They're the sweetest! Well, most of the time...*snicker*

    I love it!

    Elven
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on October 01, 2003
    whoo hoo! hehehehee yay for smut in the next chap! ^^ ~Leaf~
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