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Reviews for Happily Ever After

By : Moonshade
  • From ANON - Moi on September 25, 2003
    I love it! Remarkable start... The Will charaizatization is absolutely stunning--makes me want to cuddle 'im right up!
    *cuddles*
    Moi
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  • From ANON - Li on September 25, 2003
    Aw...good chapter. I hope Will realizes soon that the Pearl is where he should be ;)
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  • From ANON - Mary on September 25, 2003
    WUHUU!!!
    That was great!!!
    SEQUEL, SEQUEL!!!!
    yeah...

    I'm feeling cromagnon today...
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  • From ANON - Jack4Turner on September 25, 2003
    Great story so far... Can't wait to see what happens next!!! What a shame Elizabeth was left behind (MUHAHAHA *don't like Elizabeth) Well she'll just have to marry that stuffy Norrington. Allowing Will and Jack to enjoy each other. Update soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - GreyMaster on September 25, 2003
    Good start to what looks to be an excellent story! Keep it up. I look forward ta be reading more chapters. Savvy?
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on September 24, 2003
    you must update!!!!!! eeeee, this is good! heheheh ~leaf~
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  • From ANON - Edward Uwnhai Silverfang on September 24, 2003
    Very good, I loved it and cannot wait for more to come out, and if anyone else knows how I review, when I write something this short it means I couldn't find anything to criticize and I honestly loved your story in all the different aspects of plot, spelling, grammar, characterization, and anymore of those Little Fun Things that people like me like to point out to losers. Well, since I didn't, means your story was very good, just had to explain that to you. Keep up the writing, to many of the writers here should just give up and get lost, and so someone of your merit is wonderful to find.

    -Edward ai Sai Silverfang
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  • From ANON - Gabby on September 24, 2003
    Oh! I am so excited about this story! Lately my favorite fandoms have been flooded with badly-written stuff and mary sues so its lieflief to see something really good starting up. You write well, lots of action, lots of excitement, good grammer and spelling. I will be checking back everyday to check for more chapters. Lovely!!
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  • From ANON - Pookie on September 24, 2003
    *bounces*

    YAY! the way the movie shoulda ended!!!
    likeliked the bit with Will being out of body... well.. kinda out of body, during that begining part *nods*

    not sure why he doesn't know how to swim.. you thinkt aht would be something people living in a port town would wanna know... silly Will... spent too much time in the smithy *nods*

    can't wait for more!

    Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - leo on September 24, 2003
    good start. more please.
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  • From ANON - Li on September 24, 2003
    Hey, I liked it. Too bad that didn't really happen in the movie, lol.
    Keep writing, k?
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  • From ANON - Ame_chan2000 on September 24, 2003
    lol. This is going to be great! please write more soon! Will Jack give Will swimming leasons?
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  • From ANON - Ang @ on January 11, 1920
    *snerks* 'I'm not sure I deserved that'. Cute. I like. I've been thinking that Will's brush with a watery grave early in life would probably hinder his learning how to swim. Nice to see that I'm not the only one who thinks so. I like your writing style, and dear Will's mindset. And you do a good job of keeping in character with Jack. Which I think is the hardest thing about PotC fanfic. He's barmy enough that writing him is terribly hard. For me, anyway. And others, as well, from what I've been reading since becoming overly obsesssed with this particular fandom.

    Anyhow... Lovely story thus far, definatly looking forward to seeing where you go from here. ::bottles of rum all around::
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