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Reviews for Happily Ever After

By : Moonshade
  • From ANON - Tucker on October 01, 2003
    damnit!!!! don't stop!! e-mail me when you update!!! ... that was not cool. don't stop don't stop don't stop.. pikk!
    as always,
    tucker
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  • From ANON - Megan on October 01, 2003
    I really like it!! So cute with Jack giving Will swimming lessons!! Squee!! Please please please write more!! Also, I'll beta fou ifu if you want me to. Just e-mail me.
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  • From ANON - Luna Riddl@ on January 11, 0000
    *lmao* stupid whelp, doesn't know what's good for him! i want some smut in here, savvy?
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  • From ANON - JackSparrowsWhore on September 29, 2003
    GREAT STORY! I LOVE IT YOU SHOULD BE QUEEN OF THE WORLD! lol, no just crazy authoress me! Just wanted to say u people with ur reviews 'smut now, no have smut later but make us think its now, WITH HOLD ALL SMUT! But have it be now.' so lets compromise shall we....a little smuttyness now, MORE smuttyness latta! eh eh!! as guess what certain Turner is a -cough- *virgin* -cough- lol cuteness i promise, will update in a day or so! reviews make me happy, and they make me type a hell of a lot faster! (they also make me fail my math test but its all worth it) lol
    ~*~*~*~Drink e hee hearties YO HO!~*~*~*~
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  • From ANON - Queen of Vegetasei on September 29, 2003
    I love this story. The sexual tension prevail. BU. BUT, I do think that the smut should be held off, and leave us hanging until we're ready to strangle you for keeping us on the edge of our seats for so long, but on the otherhand, WILL YA HURRY UP AND MAKE WITH THE HUMPING!?

    Ah-em.

    Sorry. I'm in desperate need of more slash. Love the fic, love the sexual tension, love the fact that HOPEFULLY that Will will make Jack work for it. Alone of the ship, there is much that can happen.

    Continue and hurry it up already.
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  • From AngelRhiannon on September 29, 2003
    *grins* Well then, didn't take long deardear Will to figure out the mechanics of swimming, now did it? *pats Will's head* A bright, bright lad, he. A little slow on the uptake when it comes to plundering his Captain, but I'm sure he'll come around. *blinks* Won't he? I'll give puppy eyes and a Willow 'resolve face'. *nods* You don't want that, do you? It's a potentially lethal combination. Hehehe. Having said that, I'll fall back on the well-used 'Very nice, more please'.
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  • From ANON - Akurei on September 28, 2003
    “Well, ah least he swam…” That line caused me to almost collapse in fits of giggles. Which really wouldn't have been very dignified. Good story.
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  • From ANON - Moi on September 28, 2003
    Wow. Gah! Died nearly when it said "Swan dived after his whelp" . HIS whelp. *dies*
    Nah, Jack Sparrow is too real! But the thing is, all us girls can't have him, and we'd have to fight Will for him... So. Who knows fencing?
    Moi
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  • From ANON - Serenity on September 28, 2003
    must get next chapter out soon! by the way, smut should begin in next chapter. great work.
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  • From ANON - NieniSprings on September 28, 2003

    Heeheehee.... I love it! It's so... well........... I LOVE IT! Please update soon or else I'll track you down and.... um... MAKE YOU UPDATE! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *coughs* Good-good.
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  • From ANON - Mary on September 28, 2003
    I absolutely love this story, and cannot wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Luna Riddle on September 27, 2003
    poor whelp, he's soo confused, and the sparrow isnt helping matters much! can't wait to see more
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  • From ANON - Angel on September 27, 2003
    Bwuah! Will frightened Jack right outta the room! Good on Will! *grins* Cute, and I think I even caught one of the plays on words again. Yeah for me. ;) I like, and I won't tell the Captain that you're our whore as well. ::rum all 'round::
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  • From ANON - Moi on September 27, 2003
    Love it! Can't wait for the real stuff (even though the dream was thoroughly delicious)... poor Jack. I think Will's thrown *him* for a bit of a loop, eh, now?

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  • From ANON - DarkBubbleGum on September 27, 2003
    Yes, I could tell about the hyperveneveness in your An's....but not the Mt Dew.
    Anyway, great update, and I like how Will is unsure of his feelings and still in turmoil with his mind.
    But you gotta get to the juicey stuff soon. Please!
    Still, great update, well done!
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