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Reviews for Broken Wings

By : KCbakeneko
  • From demonsangel on November 20, 2010
    I LOVE this story. It's nice to see something on here once in a while that isn't filled to the brim with sex or violence. This was beautifully written and nicely thought out. I must admit I was sad to see you haven't done any others for Labyrinth. But anyways, amazing job ^^
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  • From GemKat5 on December 07, 2009
    This was a wonderful story, I enjoyed reading it very much.
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  • From magialuna on November 05, 2008
    This story was truly wonderful. Not horribly long, but the perfect length. Tons of adventure, a horrible villain, Sarah and Jareth working together- Sarah being brave, capable and fair to Jareth- all the "little" things that make me fall totally in love with a story. I wish this site allowed for 'favorite'd storys and authors' - you'd definitely be on the list. Do you write at ff.net as well perchance? Thank you for this wonderful story, I really enjoyed it!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2006
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  • From ANON - HerEyesCanPenetrate on November 13, 2005
    All I can say is it really touched my heart. The end brought tears. The emotion was so genuine, I was actually jealous of the characters. Keep writing! And Thank You. (ps. R&R my stuff too!)
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  • From TheShadowCat on January 13, 2005
    Oh, my god. That was absolutely beautiful. Thank you so much for posting it.
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  • From ANON - unvoicedsigner on September 06, 2004
    O_Owow that was.....................GREAT I LOVED IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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  • From ANON - ~sam~ on August 24, 2004
    holy crap. that was good. like really super good. O.O now all it needs is a little lemon added onto the end. ~_^

    this was a very good fanfic. Sarah and Jareth were both in character, and Arin was a very interesting addition. She could have had more depth... but i'm not going to complain about this fic. my favorite scene has to be the one with the Sphinx and Gloom Dragon. so fun!

    and i'm serious about that lemon. ... and what was that about Jareth being Sarah's slave? ::wiggles eyebrows::
    ~sam~
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 19, 2004
    omfg awesom... extremely awesom

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  • From ANON - Sailor Aurora on May 13, 2004
    That was so good. :)
    And you know something? I could actually see Jareth having siblings like that... quite the disfunticonal family.
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  • From ANON - Ithilin Palandiriel on April 13, 2004
    I liked the story until I got to the end. You subtly built up sexual tention between them but there was no pay off leaving me feeling a little cheated once I got to the end. I was half expecting them to be dragging each other into bed. But then that's how my smutty mind works. I was really looking forward to Jareth and Sarah and sweaty satin sheets. I don't know if you've been burned by another fic site like I have, but from what I can see the is really PG-13 material. Over all you did a good job putting it together. I look to see more from your pen in the future.
    Ithilin
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  • From ANON - Reader on April 12, 2004
    Wow,.. this is totally quality stuff! I've read thousands of fanfics,.. but,.. you're truly first rate! You are an original, totally unbelievably good writer. I'll be glad to get to know you & yr work better... =D P.S. Great grammar & spelling too.
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  • From ANON - Tsunami-chan on February 29, 2004
    Excellent! This is defineately an excellent story. I enjoyed it immencely. It totally made my day! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Aoibheann on December 25, 2003
    First of all, Melana Draconis - had this fic not been here I wouldn't have read it. Not everything HAS to be hardcore and every once in awhile it's nice to see something here that ISN'T smut. Just every once in awhile. So get off your high smut horse, thank you very much. You didn't review, you acted like a petulant child who didn't get her rocks off so she's pissed.


    Now, on to the fic...nice job, lovely characterizations, I would like to see more of them AFTER the Arin incident. Maybe then you could toss in more adult content.
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  • From ANON - Wyrm of Souls on November 24, 2003
    my dear, you struck gold! one of the best laby fics ive ever read!!! it could easily be made into the sequal, as in it would be marketable as a film, likely for a more mature audience, due to the blood sacrafices, but still, i think it would make the best sequal to the movie i have seen so far!!! you portrayed the characteerfeerfectly! i know i wont be able to say enough good things about it, so i'll just tell you it was marvelous and shut my trap :D i'll watch for other stories by you just in case you decide to write another hit :) much love- Wyrm of Souls
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