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Reviews for Broken Wings

By : KCbakeneko
  • From ANON - Malana Draconis on November 19, 2003
    First of all, I must say, nice story. Though, it should have been posted at Fanfiction.net. This is not R, Hardcore R, or NC-17. For all the loveliness of the story, the lack of grammatical and spelling errors, this fanfiction DOES NOT belong in an ADULT FAN FICTION SITE!

    Good Day To You,
    -Ma
    a
    Draconis-
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  • From ANON - JunipersGoblet on October 14, 2003
    Awesome story!! I love it. It's a bit different from all of the Labyrinth fics that I have read, but I like it. It would be really awesome it you wrote either an epilogue to the fic. *Hint, hint, hint* ;) Maybe get some Jareth/Sarah bedroom action going on. :D
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  • From ANON - Jun on October 09, 2003
    an excllent piece of writing! Are you planning an epilouge chapter? I hope so. I like the reference to Superman. Who knew the Goblin king liked movies? pe tpe to see more of your writing very soon
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  • From ANON - Talene on October 08, 2003
    Your story was so wonderful!! Although i would have prefered something a bit more romantic from them....it turned out so very well! Thank you so much for the story!!
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  • From ANON - jenn on October 07, 2003
    *stands and applauds* that is certainly one of the best labyrinth fics i've read in a long time. i loved the jareth characterization and certainly the fact that sarah could kick some serious ass. :) it certainly doesn't hurt that you're a skilled writer, with wonderful grammatical and diction handling. i'm sure you know how dreadfully annoying it is to read a fic with poor basics. however, i have one request... could we possibly see some smut attached to this? after all, you're on adultfanfic. i certainly wouldn't be against it. and besides, who will rule in the bedroom when you've got two strong people like jareth and sarah?
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on October 07, 2003
    Oh, very good! I loved this.
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  • From ANON - Talene on October 03, 2003
    Sounds intruiing! Write more?

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  • From ANON - Alex on October 02, 2003
    I really like this start and hope you'll write more...
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  • From ANON - Jun on September 23, 2003
    So far, you are doing an excellent job with this story. Labyrinth is one of my favorite movies so I am thrilled to see stories about it online. I like how you are portraying Jareth. He never seemed totally heartless, just went about things the wrong way. I hope to see more of this story soon. Keepo up the good work
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