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Reviews for The Price of Rum

By : lostmarbles
  • From ANON - Stephanie on December 07, 2003
    BEAUTIFUL!!! i love this fic, it's been so well developed, and it's incredibly sweet...i really hope you post again soon. don't make Will be get too traumatized, though...the couple is too cute to let them fall apart. like i said, great job with this piece. POST SOON!!
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  • From ANON - celticgoddess578 on December 05, 2003
    you're horrible. how could you leave it like this?? and after all Will's gone through, now you're doing this to him? how do you live with yourself??? write more soon cause i love it;)!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth on December 04, 2003
    great story needs more chapters and please update soon
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  • From ANON - Alex on November 28, 2003
    wonderful...i just now got around to reading this fic, and i love it!! the development is fantastic, better than most i've seen. and the story is sooooo sweet and so tragic...i want them to be happy again. VERY happy! i think you're doing a great job dear; PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ibonekoen on November 27, 2003
    Oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're going to leave us hanging with that?! Poor Will! I'd like to get my hands on Craig and sodomize him with a beer bottle, then wring his bloody neck.

    I commend you, by the way, on your writing ability. You have managed to weave your tale and enthrall your reader. Can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - Mahie Sparrow on November 27, 2003
    Hi Lydia! Nice chapter! I loved to see them dancing,it was so cute... :) But how could you end like that??? Poor Will,he's again on Barbossa's hands! Hope Jack come and rescue bef before it's too late! Now that Will was almost healed...I hate this Craig! He's so poisonous!! It was so sad when he ripped Will's sash. :( Come on Jack,find him!!!! Thanks for updating and keep it going! ;)
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  • From ANON - Jack4Turner on November 26, 2003
    OH NO NOT GOOD!!!!!! NOT GOOD!!!!!!
    HOW can you end it there????? That just isn't cool!!! Poor Will he must be so scared. You have to make Lille go and tell Jack that the bad man took Will away!!!! Before anything happens to Will. STUPID STUPID STUPID Craig hurting Will just because he is in a jealous rage. But wait I thought you said that he was now attracted to Will as well? How does that work if he is taking Will back to Barbossa? Oh well Please please please try to post the next chapter soon. I fear that I will no longer have a life, until you do as I will always be online checking to see if you have posted more. The suspence is killing me and I just finished reading it...imagine what is going to become of me in a few hours!!!! Excellent Chapter as always Had me going there for a min. With the Craig and Will sex I was like what the F***? But glad to see it was just a dream, a twisted dream on Craigs part. Anyways post more soon!!!!!

    Hope your life goes a little smoother too! Have a good one!

    :) Jack4Turner
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  • From ANON - Angel Jade on November 20, 2003
    Please please please please please write more! I NEED more! I'm begging you!
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  • From ANON - Jack4Turner on November 17, 2003
    Don't be upset!!!!!

    Just wanted to let yoow tow that I just reread the whole story and I have to say that is definitly one of the best pieces of Pirates of the Carib fic fiction that I have ever read. Your writing style is so smooth and very easy to follow. I absolutly love the way that you portray the characters you show such love between the characters; Jack and Will. I must say that I'm hooked on your story and that I look every day to see if it has been updated. Don't get discuraged, you are very talented, you said some postings back that you where 20? Well I must tell you thats not fair as I'm 21 and I can't write nearly as well as I think you can. Please continue with your story....


    Can't wait to read more....post more soon!!!!

    :)
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  • From ANON - lizzie on November 14, 2003
    Hey don't cry i think that this rocks i love the will is finally needing jack again i hope that the next chaptewrs are at your best good luck
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  • From ANON - Mahie Sparrow on November 14, 2003
    Oh sweetie! I didn't know you wanted feedback this much. Well,you know I love this fic but I thought I'd say it to ye again since you want feedback so much. I love this fic!!! I really do. I love the way Jack and Will are so caring with one another!! Please post more soon! I'm sure lots of people love this fic and want to read more from you! :)
    Cheers,Mariana
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  • From ANON - SerenaD on November 14, 2003
    Your story is wonderful. That is if you can call a violent story about rape wonderful. (LOL) The flow is good. You have woven the characters together well and made them so real. There are very few if any mistakes (this is a real pet peeve of mine, it's the evil English major in me coming out.) You should keep it up. The others that you have posted here are as good, but this is my favorite. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Katy Base on November 13, 2003
    Well, you wanted some reviews! Im crap at them but I will just say that this is the best POTC story ive read on here, and im not just saying that! Dont get me wrong, i love the sex (oh the shame) but the way Jack and Will are so in love is gorgeous - im a diehard romantic at heart! so pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post some more up, bcoz i cant wait to read it! And rest assured that people love this story - you said yourself you've had over 1000 hits! people just forget to review, like i have until now!

    luv Katy xxx
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  • From ANON - Jack4Turner on November 12, 2003
    Glad to see another chapter up so soon! Chapter 13 was great I just loved the part with Craig and Will and then Ana finding them. Poor Will, didn't know how close he was to real harm....thank goodness Ana came along when she did. Now if only Jack would realize what Craig is up too. I still think that he should be keel hauled and left for the sharks. Update soon...Can't wait to read more Jack and Will.

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  • From ANON - RosePetal2001 on November 12, 2003
    I love the lovey dovey stuff like when they kiss each other tenderly or hold each other and of couse I like the sex sene to. I also like all the emotional trauma what am I saying I love the story period it has a good plot to it. And pleases update soon again. Thanks
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