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Reviews for The Haunting Place

By : Lktwoozee
  • From ANON - Isobel on April 14, 2005
    Holy Jesus.

    Just read this in about five hours straight and am STILL stuck to my chair like limpet (take that how you will).
    1) You have an OC that I actually like, with an in depth character that is completely believable. The addition of her ghost is something I've actually not come across in any other fanfic and is just what it needs. A way to give several different viewpoints on the same action. That's not doing it justice, but you get the general idea.
    2) Jack is wonderful. Superb. BELIEVABLE. In character, and beautifully described. Thanks for not making him perfect, or a complete simpering eunuch.
    3) I have a hard time not laughing out loud most of the time - my family might think it a little strange, considering I'm supposed to be revising.
    4) Perfectly fluently written - one of those rare fanfics where you don't even notice the words on the page because it's so vivid.
    5) Someone who can spell and knows what grammar is! Hallelujah!

    Basically (trying to to gush here) am slightly incoherent due to the awe-inspiring vision of Jack naked. But it is a truly inspired fanfic, and I will give you my undying devotion if you write more. And quickly. It's already being distributed around my like-minded friends

    Izzy
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  • From Arella on April 03, 2005
    Just reread your whole story - and I still love, no, adore it!
    Will you go on - and when?
    Hoping & keepin' my fingers crossed that you'll make it happen, preferrably sometime soon... ;)
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on March 28, 2005
    WooHoo! What a fun and sexy story! Gotta love Cap'n Jack. Hope you will continue to entertain us with more soon.
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  • From ANON - sparrowslass on March 18, 2005
    more please!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 24, 2005
    Bloody Hell!!! Your story was not where I usually read it and I panicked! Thank God I found you. Do you know why you're not there any more? Anyway, great chapters! Jail scene with ghosts was excellent and please tell me that strip poker was invented back then! Also, having touched on how Jack and Maren feel about each other. it would be interesting to see how Maren would react if Jack showed his attentions to another woman. Keep up the great writing!
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  • From ANON - depp.me on February 23, 2005
    More, MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - Karna on January 20, 2005
    i dont think i could love this story any more than i do.

    thats all i have to say!
    toodles!
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  • From JennyPugh on January 19, 2005
    Being as the 'other place' went down before I could review, you've got it here instead! I love it when Jack is telling a story - he can certainly tell me a bedtime story any day of the week. The part in the prison really gave me the creeps - well done!
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  • From ANON - Michiru Kaiou on January 19, 2005
    YAY! Updates!!!! I have been checking religiously and now I have been rewarded! :) Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on January 18, 2005
    Oh god not cards!!!!! Not a bad job on the birth control. Where did you get the idea?? Are you sure we can't work on a joined story??? You know you want to!!! Update soon my friend! Another good chapter......*bows*

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - Mel on January 18, 2005
    Silphium? Man, makes ya wonder, you know? Jesus, curiosity eats my brain. I want a silphium plant. ...c_c Er.

    Anyway, YOU FINALLY CONTINUED! OMFG THANK YOU!
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  • From Pankhurst on January 16, 2005
    So glad to see that this story is being updated again. :-)
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on January 15, 2005
    Oh God another fabulous chapter!!! I can't believe you waited so long to update. Course I can't say too much, I haven't updated in a while. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! Update soon! BTW Your chapters are bloody hilarious!

    -Chelsey-
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  • From ANON - Spaci on January 15, 2005
    Finally!!!! Yay!! You're back! I missed you! And 50 chapters sounds just fine to me! I don't really want the story of Jack and Maren to ever end! That last seen was hot and cute at the same time!
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on January 15, 2005
    YEAH!!!! You're back! I have been anxiously awaiting chapter updates for sooo long! I was afraid you had forgotten about us! The wait was definitely worth while! Killer writing,dearie! I'm so in love with Maren and Kristie. And Jack of course! I can not wait to see where you are going with this story. It has been so awesome from the very beginning! One of the BEST stories out! The screenwriters for POTC 2 & 3 should be asking you to help! So happy to read from you again and hope to not have to wait so long for future updates! Happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K :)
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