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Reviews for The Haunting Place

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  • From ANON - Iamwickedcool on October 01, 2003
    Man, keeps getting better and better....PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!!!!!!!!.....
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  • From ANON - Boshomengro on October 01, 2003
    Awesome!
    This is unique and extremely good. I've so enjoyed reading this and I'm longing for more.
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  • From ANON - Anni on September 29, 2003
    Hi again! Just checking for an update. Hope all is well with you, and that the Muses are being cooperative!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2003
    Whoo!!! I love this!!! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jamie on September 23, 2003
    Lovely. Cannot wait to read more.

    J
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  • From ANON - Dellie on September 22, 2003
    Citadel the story is going great!! Maren is holding out considerablely well considering what shes up against, (if only we all possesed such will power...) Jacks still great Keep going with the hand gestures its what alot uthouthors forget about with Jack! Anyway kudos babe keep it up. Oh and thanks for the oil :)
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  • From ANON - Iamwickedcool on September 22, 2003
    Wonderful story cant wait for more!!!!! Your my first review~can I have a treat?
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  • From ANON - gylzgirl on September 22, 2003
    Maren's not the only damn tease :) Though to be fair you did say chapter 11 and not them but D'Oh! Can't wait for more!


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  • From ANON - Anni on September 22, 2003
    I am enjoying this story so much! It is very textured and colorful, with great characterizations. I would love to know your profession, as I assume that you write professionally. Please! continue to update!
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  • From ANON - sarahpearl on September 21, 2003
    hey citadel,

    wow, more great chapters. i just loved the whole jack and maren opium party. it was so funny. poor jack. you so have to write more. this story is amazing.

    oh and thank u for caticating those chas tos to me. it was very sweet of you to do that amd it made me happy. oh and ill try not to be to naughty in jacks cabin..........but no promises. lol

    well keep up the excellent work.

    sarah xxx
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  • From ANON - gylzgirl on September 21, 2003
    Here I was all excited with a two chapter update, and another chapter gets loaded up while I'm reading part 6! Whoo!!! I must say, Maren has far more self-control than I would :) This story is just awesome! I love all the characters! Especially Kristy... though I think if she'd go off for a couple hours, Maren might give in to our lovely Cap'n's charms

    Keep writing! I can't wait for more!

    Tricia
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  • From ANON - CQ on September 21, 2003
    I am eagerly awaiting the next chapters of your story. Love your depiction of Capt. Jack- in character, crazy as a fox, sexy as hell. I liked the scene with the crew when he first comes aboard the Pearl- I always thought his stoner act was a mask designed to throw off his enemies. You show Jack's reckless streak and how he calculates just what he can get away with. Maren is a great foil for Jack- she is feisty and brings her own gift to the adventure. It would be fun to see her "toy" a little more with Jack. (love the chocolate scene). Your dialogue is good and believable for the time frame. Kristy is lots of fun too. Who can resist a real bad boy who can be a real good man? Not me.
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  • From ANON - gylzgirl on September 18, 2003
    I love it! Great OC and Jack is awesome and in character. Oh I hope there's more soon! Write write write!!!
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  • From ANON - Dellie on September 14, 2003
    hey I love your story! Jack is so in character, please continue you're doing such a great job
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  • From ANON - Jessie Seagull on September 11, 2003
    I love your OC, she's so fiesty. This idea definately shows promise, I can'it tit to see where it goes.
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