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Reviews for Next of Kin

By : Bells
  • From berkie88 on July 13, 2007
    you haven't updated in so long! I hope you'll continue the story... I want to know what happened to Jack to make him as he is, and if he'll ever get some of the personality Will knew back... and off course the relationship but that can wait ;-) please tell me you haven't left the fandom/stopped writing fanfiction?
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  • From ANON - Jack4Turner on September 10, 2003
    WOW!!!!
    I'm really enjoying your story so far. Can't wait to see what is going to happen next. I really want to know what you have haunting Jack from his past. Hopefully it will come out at some point? Keep up the excellent story and post soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Rakohammas on September 08, 2003
    thats the right addy!
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  • From ANON - DarkBubbleGum on September 07, 2003
    It's a good idea, and you have great descritive language here.
    But I feel I should point something out that has been pointed out to me, jack doesn't really talk like a pirate.
    in the movie there was a drawl in his speech but it was never as strong as what you have.
    I just thought I'd mention it, but then again, you have had him change a little, so it might just be part of the character.
    Anyway, good general idea. Hope you update again soon.
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