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Reviews for Padme's Illness

By : LRThunder
  • From ANON - chaud on April 18, 2005
    tis fandom is a little weird becuase you have Padme and Jacen togther.This would technally be incest because Jacen is Padme's grandson and the fact that the time frames are completey out of place .
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  • From ANON - The_Evil_Reviewer on April 17, 2005
    ok, the name of the disease sucks, and who the hell is this Jacen or whatever dude? i mean you should give him a backround, what he has to do with Padme and etc. ok sorry i'm a wee bit stressed out, i have sunburn and i'm really grouchy...... but ok Jacen the OC is ok... but the name of disease still sucks.... come on! : )
    you can be more creative than that!! :D :D
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  • From ANON - Sky on December 20, 2003
    Hmm. It's not terribly bad but it's really not very good, either. You have a lot of good elements but there's just something lacking in a major way. It doesn't flow, it has no -- I don't know what. It's not detailed and the people in it don't seem real. It's good try though and I'm sure you will improve with practice.
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  • From ANON - SailorPoison on October 27, 2003
    It's definly different and good sex scene! ^.^ Lucky padme... hehehehe
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