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Reviews for Torture And Tranquility

By : Concrete-Diamond
  • From ANON - Mireille on January 15, 2013
    Yeah, an update :)

    Poor baby, but what is happening to him exactly on that bed and with the saw?

    Getting his feelings is great but a little help from a tormentor's point of view would really help as well :)

    What is going to happen to him now?.. Please, post more soon :)


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  • From ANON - Mireille on December 10, 2012
    Oh, wanton little thing... Mean old Sith bat :) But I feel as if we barely get glimpses of what is happening to him. Longer scenes, more details please :) I have a lot of imagination to fill in the gaps, but I still like to be fed more to work with :)

    Please, post more soon :)
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  • From ANON - Mireille on December 07, 2012
    Oh boy, was that his first time being used like that? I'm surprised he didn't have to be dragged out from under the desk instead of complying... Unless he has been broken 'off screen' of course :)

    A flashback of that would be cool :) to see how Palpy did it :)

    And so, he will still expose the boy to the public? I thought he'd keep him conceal from now on :)

    Can't wait to see what you have in mind next :)

    More soon, please :)

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  • From ANON - Mireille on December 04, 2012
    :D well well well, that is 'almost' as good a predicament as Palpy raping him :) I wonder what he has in mind for the poor baby :)

    Great work once again, dear :)

    More soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Skyjade3@hotmail.com on December 03, 2012
    Gah!!!!!!!! Stupid, stupid, stupid Jedi and their all mighty righteousness!

    They threw him right into Palpy's claws!

    Poor baby, it's really not going up for him, is it?

    More soon, please :)

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  • From ANON - Mireille on December 01, 2012
    Oh yes, he needs a big hug :) will Obi ever figure out that it happened again right under his nose ? I hope so ;)

    As someone who regularly warms herself in a bath, I'd say steaming hot water would have worked even better to warm him up :) though, if he were feverish, dang cold lukewarm water was a must... But poor baby...

    Will Palpy still be interested in the weakling he has become? Can Ani even remain with the order?

    More soon, please :)
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  • From ANON - Mireille on November 30, 2012
    Oh boy, this was quite something :) poor baby... He needs a big hug from Obi before they take action against that filth :)

    I wonder why he didn't use the Force to shove things away or even escape, though, or how Obi or the council couldn't be aware of his nearby distress? Surely, it would have been unmistakable given its intensity :)

    Or is he forever damaged in every possible ways?

    Can't wait for more :)


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  • From ANON - Mireille on November 29, 2012
    Poor baby... How did the slime got him to do that? Why didn't he leave when he realized what would happen?

    And who's the important new person? Palpatine? Or the slave master at Jabba's ? ;p

    Can't wait for more :) great work once again :)

    Love
    Mireille
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  • From ANON - Mireille on November 28, 2012
    No!! The slime slave master didn't!!! He's going to sell his sevices right under Obi's nose?? And the council seeks to separate them???? Where is Yoda to fix that mess??

    Thanks for the update :)

    More soon, please!!
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  • From ANON - Mireille on November 27, 2012
    Oh oh oh :) Ani is a nymphomaniac now :) that won't sit well with the council, will it? :)

    I wonder if Padme still fit in there ;p

    Great start, dear :)

    More soon, please :)


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