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Reviews for Oh, Now Why the Concern?

By : jinx1764
  • From Love_Struck on June 13, 2021

    Oohhh !!! Is there going to be any more to this?? It's been left on a cliffhanger and I'm hooked lol ... 


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  • From Love_Struck on February 24, 2021

    Oh man!! A cliffhanger!! Absolutely loved it .... but what about Sarah and Jareth?? Do they finally get to be together?? Is Sarah saved properly?? This is FANTASTIC!! 💖💖


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  • From redmoonrising75 on June 07, 2017

    OH. MY. GOD! This story is absolutely WONDERFUL!! Will there be more soon???


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  • From Trinity on April 08, 2017

    I want to leave a review but I am not sure I have words for what I feel at this moment. To let you know that I have enjoyed your story and I would love if you continue. 

    Thank you!

    Trinity


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  • From Trinity on April 01, 2017

    I've sat and read your story waited patiently to see Sarah saved... only to find it hasn't been written yet... my heart breaks and you have a quiet a talent for writing him. To that end I'm glad life is turning around for you! Continue your story please I look forward to your next installment!

     

    Trinity


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  • From Notorious_QIP on February 13, 2017

    I'm a big lover of Labyrinth fan fiction so it's great to see you continuing with this. A very different take on it and I am keen to see where it goes. My only criticism would be how Jareth refers to Toby as 'my boy' so often. Find it a little distracting but maybe that's just me. The relationship between the two of them is so sweet. Hope we see more soon. 


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  • From Baileybaby16 on July 17, 2016

    Such a great story! Please continue!


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  • From Iunkougaheart on July 08, 2016

    Oh god I read to the final chapter only to fins it is incomplete and there has been no updates since 2014. How can I get over such pain? I love this story please please come back and finish it or tell me where I can find the finished chapters. You shape Jareth in a new light that I find super refreshing and I feel so sorry for the characters of Sarah and Toby. Amazing job and I hope you find the time to finish it soon.

     


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  • From ANON - Wolfmoonsshadow on October 12, 2015
    This has been a good trip. But where does it go?
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  • From ANON - Wolfmoonsshadow on October 11, 2015
    It's been a while, and I've missed your quirky storytelling. How did the original story, you were using elements from your other labyrinth fiction, turn out?
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  • From ANON - Sinner's Shadow on April 20, 2014
    I really love the drama. The plot twists are unexpected and make the characters take on a life of their own. I sure hope you havent stopped writing for it.
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  • From ANON - Hotforteacher3 on December 19, 2013
    AAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHH!! That's one motherfucker of a cliffhanger! PLEASE DONT LEAVE ME LIKE THIS!!!!
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  • From ANON - NSarahK on September 02, 2013
    >_< please don't stop writtening this story it's getting sooooo good ps Chpt 18 "after this, therefore because of this", right? But, to know what that means for the chapter hmmmm.
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  • From LadyHemlock27 on June 09, 2013
    lol oh I love this story, but what an evil little cliffie
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  • From StoryGirl on May 23, 2013
    This is my very favorite Labyrinth fic on this site. I'll now never be able to refer to Chuck E. Cheese as anything other than "Charles of the Cheese." LMAO.
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