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Reviews for The Edge

By : LittleMuse
  • From ANON - Lily on July 01, 2013
    I find it to be quite disappointing that you are no longer working on this amazingly well written story. Also, I do not agree with the comment above that attempted to point out a plot hole, as I believe you explained it rather clearly. The problem was not so much that Jim is human, but that he is a male and therefore would be most likely viewed as a threat rather than a potential mate by Spock's primal side... In any case, I wish to convey my utmost enjoyment of the half of the story that you did complete. I can relate to many, many of the emotions expressed, and even a bit to the dynamics of their relationship. Perhaps I shall come up with a happier ending in my head for them, one to counter the rather unfortunate result of my own such circumstances... Again, thank you for the enjoyable read. Live long and prosper.
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  • From ANON - fnw on May 22, 2013
    I know you must not be working on this story any longer (and i'm usually one of the lazy slobs who can't be bothered to write a review even when i truly enjoyed a fanfiction) but i thought that i just HAD to let you know.... i am so utterly enthralled by your story!!
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  • From mancer on May 08, 2012
    I truely enjoyed your writing! You've got a lovely grasp of the characters, and the dicotemy between what they want and the reality of their lives is exquisite torture. Kudos! Hope you'll continue to rake them over the coals in the future!
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  • From HollyCP1 on November 27, 2011
    It's interesting, but has one MAJOR plot hole. Amanda went through Ponn Farr with Sarek, and did fine. It's mentioned in more than one of the novels. So there would be no reason for Jim not to go through it with Spock.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on April 11, 2011
    Thank you for the chappie, just what the doctor ordered!
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  • From ANON - Lord Darling on April 07, 2011
    I'm really enjoying this so far! You have a gift for layered, complex dialogue and angst. I find their predicament compelling and can't wait to finish the tale. Incidentally, you can't use the word 'lowly' as an adverb. It's illogical to do so, as Spock would say! 'Lowly' is an adjective meaning 'humble'. Great work,anyway.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on March 08, 2011
    This chappie seemed deep to me somehow. Brain wheels just a turning away. So complicated and yet love it so much!
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  • From ANON - kuragari on February 23, 2011
    beautiful chapter. had my heart clenching by the end. love it and can't wait to read more because it's absolutely brilliant!
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on February 23, 2011
    OMG, they finally get a little action to ease their frustrations if only a little. But still it was quite delicious.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on January 16, 2011
    Hmm, I can't help but think something else is happening to them. But maybe that's just me :).
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  • From Kuragari75 on January 07, 2011
    This is so heart-wrenching! Very well written and absolutely lovely... but OH! POOR JIM AND SPOCK!!! hope to see more soon as I'm very curious how this is going to continue.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on January 04, 2011
    Oh, I wished they could have at least held hands. But then Spock would be like, "that would be most unwise" >:O. Anyway that was really good. I wonder if there's still gonna be alot of sexual tension for Spock even though he's married now? Gosh I hope so, Jim on the other hand has shown restraint but for how long ^_~.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on January 03, 2011
    At first I didn't pay this story any attention. But then today I decided oh what the heck I'll give it a read. So glad I did, can't wait to read the next chappie ^-^!
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  • From ANON - Keira on January 03, 2011
    Extremely well written and thoroughly captivating. I must confess I had lost faith in the abilities of writers in certain fandoms until I found this gem. I love LOVE your Kirk and I actually felt heartsick (which has only happened once while reading fic, I must say) for him and I am dying to see how this continues. Thank you for your great contribution to fanfiction :) Happy writings!
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  • From ANON - Maria on December 31, 2010
    AHH! More..more please hurry up! =)
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