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Reviews for Hellraiser: The Will of One

By : GregDienhart
  • From cenobite93 on January 31, 2022

    Loved it.


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  • From LadyOfDaGame on January 16, 2011
    why did you make repeat chapters?
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on January 15, 2011
    Damn
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  • From wertyleigh on August 01, 2010
    :) I just came across your story, And was wondering If you were going to update, Or if you could send me the story :D

    Thank you
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  • From Vyper on October 16, 2008
    So they turned Larry into a Cenobite, well, this is rather interesting. Still Pinhead should take advantage of Kirsty. Even hell needs a bit more of her in their order after all she did. Oh well, watch out for the smurfs. They will come.........oh yes........they will come. Afterall it was indeed another tease. The Virgin is such a bitch. I think it would have been fun to watch Kirsty have her way with Pinhead just to see that one writhe.
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  • From Vyper on October 15, 2008
    I believe that for the tease at the end that I shall whip you with a wet noodle rather than the beat stick you really wanted. I think smurfs are on their way from hell to visit your Mother and it is all because your Father smells of Smurfberries. And here you thought that Mr. Rogers was scary. Write more oh gruesome artist before I find little fluffy bunnies to poop out cadburry eggs all over your yard.
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  • From GregDienhart on October 15, 2008
    Vyperbites-
    Thank you for the great reviews...I've been chuckling to myself ever since I first read them...but Elmo screaming my name?...LMAO
    Another chapter, the final chapter..is coming later today.
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  • From Vyper on October 14, 2008
    I think a fear of the purple dinosaur was a good way to get a new chapter, but torture is only a Mr. Rogers away. A whipping of Sesame Street for your efforts and Elmo might scream your name to be his friend nightly unless you continue on. Your story is excellent and all my imaginary friends agree.
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  • From Vyper on October 12, 2008
    I liked the update, but still waiting for the next chapter. I am sure you will make them bleed and I will do all I can to find the teletubbies and barney to kill them before they find you. Still they may show up singing love songs so know hell is only a channel away on your tv. I hear they sneak out and devour children at night. But, I could be off base, probably not so watch your ass.
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  • From Vyper on October 08, 2008
    So the torture and murder continues. It is a great epic for a new movie. Keep writing.
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  • From Vyper on October 05, 2008
    Yo, dude. Are you going to write more or what? I am waiting......baited breathe........all that jazz. Got to finish what you start or they will come for you....ya know the Teletubbies which makes hell look pleasent. Barney is on his way to see you and he loves you. See make you think up more great torture stuff to write since we know that would be hell.
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  • From Vyper on October 03, 2008
    This is just like one of the movies. Very graphic in comparison, but still the movie itself would be editing a few of the things they felt unnecessary. I think however for a book this would be quite the read. You indeed have reviewed your work quite well and it would be interesting to have a few of Elizabeth Bathordy or Vlad Tepes items a foot lost in the earth where the Cenobites still search for their lost items of destruction to their masses. Pandora's box should not be opened by the weak of heart. I am indeed impressed since this movie terrified and intrigues the morbid dark part of the human mind imagining what hell could be like since imaginary pain is more horrific then the actual act itself. Hell has always been more of a state of mind and the human mind can only handle so much torment before it indeed goes insane. Pinhead has always had his infatuation with Kirsty so to see them as one will be of interest since Pinhead was never really a part of the man he possessed, but an entity all his own in his demonic cruel cold nature. Very good story and well written.
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  • From Darkaus on September 19, 2008
    what happened to the rest of the chapters and all the reviews?! This was a shock. Are you revising?
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  • From xsuzyxninjax on September 05, 2008
    awwwww
    looks like kirsty gets that shaft on that deal
    too bad
    i was kinda rooting for her to get what she wanted
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  • From Darkaus on September 01, 2008
    Please continue! I am eager to see how Kirsty and Pinhead will interact when they are actualy face to face.
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