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Reviews for The Rise of the Demon King's Consort

By : Sparrowbirdie
  • From IamM on September 02, 2007
    Perfect ending to the chapter, I was on the edge of my seat looking for the "next chapter" button for a full five minutes before realizing there was none. I'm such an idiot. Please update when you have the time, thank you for writing such an interesting story.
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  • From ANON - Temari on September 02, 2007
    I love your story. Though it's sort of sad what happens to the third child and how the other two grow up so fast. I hope you keep updating cause I hate it when people stops on such a good story! Hope paris have a girl instead. It would quite a surprise. Bet she'll grow up to be a little devil.
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  • From Sakya on September 02, 2007
    Oh, the plot thickens. The boys are now grown ups... the demons are not much for childhood are they? It makes sense, I think. But how will that play with the whole situation with Paris and the demon king? Can they bring the third child back to life?

    Ohh, the king is seeing the pearl. Will Paris be reborn as Will? I don't see Elizabeth too happy about this whole demon king thing. Too bad for her. Maybe that is exactly what Paris needs to recover from his time as a whore.

    Plus, imortality... very good. :) Please update soon.
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  • From Sakya on September 01, 2007
    Yes, a new chapter. A new chapter! Did you know that I check the 'Troy' list everyday now just to see if you updated?

    I know... well, I hope things will work out in the end, but I don't see an easy way for this to happen. Paris is too broken and the king too clueless - a recepie for disaster.

    It will be fun to read. :) Please update soon.
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  • From IamM on August 31, 2007
    The last two chapters were so beautiful, this story is turning into a favorite very quickly. Keep up the good work and update whenever you find the time!
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  • From Sakya on August 30, 2007
    Wow, how come I didn't see this one before? I must be getting old... well, older. hehehe

    I like it but I did miss a bit more description of how was their life in the first two and a half years and why did Paris fall from grace with the king. No need to go back now - I hate when the hero suffers - just a little reminder for next time.

    Please update soon.
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  • From IamM on August 25, 2007
    Oh what a wonderful story! Beautifully written, I must say. Please continue when you find the time, it's such an interesting plot line!
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  • From ANON - leggolust on August 23, 2007
    Wow, this is great! I already love Troy fanfiction, and here I get a fantastic alternate universe story connected to my other favorite fandom, Pirates of the Carribean. Thanks for writing, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Wick on August 22, 2007
    Wow... love your stories!!!... especially this fic.

    Please do continue updating, looking forward to futher update for both fic.
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  • From ANON - bloomingbust on August 21, 2007
    that asshole he should know paris would never betray him!!!!
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  • From darkshadowarchfiend on August 13, 2007
    damn PARIS should have sadi he didn't do anything and what did the DEMON KING expect that PARIS would welcome him with open arms. He has some serious work to do to get back PARIS's trust
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  • From ANON - Livaof golm on August 11, 2007
    please update soon i love this story.
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  • From darkshadowarchfiend on August 08, 2007
    damn the demon king is stupid. how could he not ask paris if he cheated. ASSHOLE!!!!!!
    and now paris has been raped repeatedly and has lost a child, and doesn't know his two children. like I said an ASSHOLE and STUPID!!!!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE!!! i WANNA SEE HOW HE IS GOING TO MAKE THIS UP TO PARIS
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  • From Winterlove4 on August 07, 2007
    oooh no poor paris
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  • From Ishki on August 06, 2007
    interesting story, please update soon!!!!
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