Reviews for The Apocalypse Begins

BY : slayer-of-evil


  • From AnihyrMoonstar on November 07, 2011

    Is English not your first language? If it's not, I would recommend reading a bit more and growing more accustomed the rules of grammar, punctuation, and sentence formatting. If it is your first language...well, the same as above, I suppose.

    ~Moonstar

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