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Reviews for Sun Kissed

By : Vee017
  • From Hubrisarchtype on January 20, 2013
    Excellent work, I was wondering if you'd be interested on working with me on a fanfiction idea, keep up the excellent work!
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  • From ANON - anon on December 01, 2012
    I would like to note that story is posted twice in chapter 16. And regardless if you will continue it or not, the story itself is ūery interesting.
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  • From JLHanley13 on May 09, 2012
    I loved it!
    One of the best fics I have ever read.
    Thank you.
    ~ Loki
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  • From ANON - pjspikegirl on March 21, 2012
    It always made me really sad to think of all of those years Obi-Wan spent alone in the desert watching over Luke from afar after the clone wars. He really is a solid hero and a lovely man. I like how in your story he has escaped the life of a Jedi. He has deep disappointment about being sent to the agicorps, but maybe he will see that in the long run he is lucky not to be sucked completely into the Jedi’s dogma about love and attachment. I think your Anakin is spot on. He is impulsive, emotional, and affectionate, a perfect match to Obi-Wan’s calm reserved nature. I will eagerly be awaiting an update to this awesome story-Thanks for a great read.
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  • From ANON - WuXia on September 28, 2011
    Usually when a story isn't updated in a while, I'll have forgotten the previous story line, and usually decide not to read the update out of laziness. However, I remember liking this story so much, that I read the entirety of it to refresh and then the update. I'm glad I did!
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  • From ANON - ryn on January 08, 2011
    I really like where this is going, your pacing on the charecter development is awesome. It seems to be avoiding falling into all the same cliches and such you usually see in "what if" stories. keep up the good work and dont feel pressed into ecpplorng every single what-if. I like the subjects youare working.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2009
    much fear indeed
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  • From dragonfall on September 23, 2009
    I love this story. Really, truly, I do, and it makes me happy when you update!
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  • From RubyQuinn on May 06, 2009
    Great story! I can't wait to read more :)
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  • From ruleroftravels on February 22, 2009
    I love this story!!! Your writing is so fun to read, and you portray the characters so well! I hope you get a chance to update soon, this is wonderful!!
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  • From ANON - tec on February 20, 2009
    This fic is really good. I like the slow building of the relationship between Anakin and Obi-wan, whose reactions are great. I loved Yoda's line about his ears, too. It makes me sad that Obi-wan never became an apprentice, but on the other hand, I like that it gives a different perspective on how they came together. I found this story during a search for something else, but I was wondering if you had an email list for updates since I don't really check this site often.
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  • From ANON - sh1 on January 31, 2009
    I have to admit I was hesitant to read your story at first because the wording in the summary sounded like Anakin and Obi-wan would be Phantom Menace age aka too high a squick factor. However, while this story does have its squicky moments, they are realistic and necessary to the plot. Your portrayal of what the characters might've been like in different circumstances is touching and tragic- as though the galaxy could've been a better place overall (Palpatine dead, Dooku still good etc.) with the sacrifice of Anakin and Obi-wan's lives. On a lighter note you've written the best Yoda line I've read in a fanfiction, "Hear you, I can. Not for decoration, these ears are.”
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  • From ANON - RebRiddle on December 28, 2008
    Awwww Obi is soo confused ^_^ I love Yoda and really look forward to reading more. This is one of my favorite plot lines and I can't wait until Ani and Odi get together!
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  • From cloudi on April 12, 2008
    This story is really great. I love the plot. It's very different to anything else. I wonder what's going to happen with Yoda? Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Rebriddle on January 27, 2008
    I love this story!!!! ^__^ It's cute and sad *huggz* Nice Chapter!
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