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Reviews for Stars of Glory

By : reddragon
  • From ANON - David on December 10, 2008
    Excelent story 1010 liked the yavin battle.ps update!
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  • From Apoc326 on August 20, 2008
    Ok, I love that someone took both of these universes and slammed them together with great results. However, as with everything, the Devil is in the details.

    Clan and Inner Shere WarShips and JumpShips jump to system zenith points and let the drop ships burn insystem and land. Only on VERY rare ocasions do WarShips or unarmed JumpShips move insystem.

    The Kerensky bloodname belongs to Clan Wolf.

    Why would the Khan himself leave his clan for an indeterminable period of time in a JumpShip instead of one of the mothballed BattleShips?

    Other than those, I have no complaints about this story. Excellent imagery and well thought out.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2007
    Dude this story kicks ass

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  • From ConjuredShadows on January 26, 2007
    Very cool. I've been waiting for your next installment in this series for quite some time. I hope you'll continue the great work. I'm in agreement with the above, though, regarding gundam. You have something awesome going here, better to make small adjustments rather than creating an exponential story shift that's far from either of the universes.
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  • From qwerty47667 on January 24, 2007
    hey man, good story, really good, but don't go adding Gundam, keep to the 'mech and star wars stuff, that has already been established in the story. also gundam is a little too unbelievable and going a little too far out of the realm of physically possible
    keep up the good story
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  • From ANON - ben on November 29, 2006
    Amazing i'm speechless...just one question when's the next chapter coming i'm really looking forward to seeing the CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT in the next chapter so please update as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2006
    More writing please!

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  • From ANON - alpha on October 29, 2006
    great story! do another chapter lol
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  • From ANON - The Fanatic on October 25, 2006
    This seems like a very well written story and i have only read the first chapter but i find a few innacuracies. For one the TIE fighter is only 1/4 the side and over twice as fast as an aerospace fighter from mechwarrior. the aerospace fighter has more weapons and armor and the TIE has such thin armor that just one shot would take it. There would be no jockying for position in that firht it would be more like gun ships vs fighters, the fighters flitting about and the gunships blasting away. that fight would come down to numberswhoever could place more firepower in the field would win. as for the capital ships, while the star destroyers would take damadge from gauss rifles, the dropships would never get more than one volley off. either they would be blown out of the sky, due to a lack of sheilds, or they would be rendered immobile from ion cannons. as to the ion cannons not working on the dropships, ion cannons short out electrical systems of which there are a lot of on a dropship. the gauss rifles are shot using electro-magnetic coils to speed up a nickel-iron ferrus slug up to supersonic speeds. without the electrical systems they would never shoot. missles use electrical systems to ignite their fuel and to guide them selves and the PPC also needs electricity to shoot. i am a large fan of both Mechwarrior and Star Wars and i have read almost all of the books and seen the movies, and played all the games (exept for the star wars games they get things wrong too often.) so forgive me if i seen condescending i just know altogether too much about this stuff.
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  • From ANON - ur fan on October 06, 2006
    man that was freakishly nice
    write more.
    u play mech assult or mech warriors?
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  • From ANON - SqurielLord on October 03, 2006
    hmm...no update in a while...
    I can think of soem very intersting smut that could go on, either 1)elementals 2)a mech's cockpit and overheating.
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  • From ANON - Me. on August 12, 2006
    So...are you going to update? (Don't answer. Do.)
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  • From ANON - SqurielLord on August 08, 2006
    Selya!
    May the denizens of the galactic core be broguht back to the star league once again!

    Now that you think about it an AT-AT is a quad mech with 2 ppcs and 2 Md pulse lasers.
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  • From ANON - Admiring Author on July 14, 2006
    You...... Are...... God! You've succesfully mixed my two most favorite sci fi series and done it with awesome detail and great plot at the same time. How on earth are you such a genius? Keep up the awesome writing dude(dudette?)

    Admiring Author
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  • From ANON - McSpiff on July 07, 2006
    Update I say, or I shall steal all bannanas and chocolate milk i n your house!
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