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Reviews for To the Victor goes the Spoils/Continued

By : Darkaus
  • From Tazendra on November 22, 2006
    Wow, I didn't expect to see another chapter so soon. I love that we get to see things over at Behemoth's place. The way you have emphasized Leviathan's hell as being orderly and Behemoth's as chaotic is really well done. So now it looks like the armies on both sides are just about ready to attack. I can just picture them both moving out at the same time and meeting somewhere between hells. This is definitely shaping up to be a really intense battle. Oh and the hot Pinhead sex was great too. Nice to see him alone with his first again, she's a feisty one. As always, I look forward to more of this story.
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  • From Tazendra on November 16, 2006
    Gah! You updated. Yay!

    You're really building the suspense in this chapter. Not one, but two prophecies, eh? The two thrones thing sounds really neat but Xipe Topec dying? Well I suppose it wouldn't be the first time... but that doesn't mean I won't be sad if it happens. Have I mentioned that Extapis is a really cool name, because it is. Also, I like his character a lot. He is like a younger Xipe, and perhaps a more ambitious one.

    Glad to see you're still updating this story. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Tazendra on November 14, 2006
    I'm really glad you continued this story. It's very creative. The whole war between Behemoth and Leviathan in chapter 9 was really cool and I like the part where Xipe was pulled into the real world for a while. I think you really manage to keep him in character while at the same time writing really hot sex scenes (Xipe is so yummy!). I am sort of confused by chapter 10 though. Was that supposed to be the end of this story? Because in chapter 8 there was the whole set up for another war between the Horrif and the Gash but chapter 10 just shows us the previous war and how the current Xipe Topec was born. Unless you meant to end the story with the huge cliffhanger of an upcoming war in hell... If you ever decide to come back to this story it would be awesome to see one more chapter detailing the second war.
    Anyway, I really enjoyed all that you've written so far. I guess not a lot of people come to this particular section of AFF.net (The world needs more love for Hellraiser) but I really appreciate that you write these stories anyway.
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  • From Cinnamontea on June 20, 2006
    Cool, I'm glad he's alright. I've posted ch12. Ch 13...He gets to fight Shinzon.
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  • From ANON - Ladydoma on June 18, 2006
    That is awesome you have made Totec a GOD!!!NICE these new characters are interesting. I like it.
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  • From ANON - ladydoma on June 16, 2006
    You are so good, How can you keep going,girl? Oh well. Keep it up man!!!! Ch11 should be up in couple days when my laptop works again'
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  • From ANON - Ladydoma on June 15, 2006
    Yeah she'll get jealous. Anywho haven't heard from ya in a couple days. Working on ch11 right now some one important dies. Guess who? Email me later. K? Anywho I think you should like have him love.....well stay with the princess lady who had his baby.But it is totally up to you.
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  • From ANON - ladydoma on June 15, 2006
    I like it so cute...I think....anywho about ready to put up chapter nine.
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  • From ANON - ladydoma on June 13, 2006
    Cool chapter man. I am never very good with like fight scenes. Thank you for the answer. Still trying to write chapter Eight. I have the end already thought out. This is between us. She has him make her a Cenobite.But this is way ahead. Dude we should email eachother. Ladydoma@juno.com. It's totally up to you.Anywho please keep up your writing.
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  • From ANON - ladydoma on June 11, 2006
    You can tell that I have no life. It is 8 am and already I am on this web site. Damn Pinhead is the stud!! A question though if Dreamer gave him head wouldn't her cig burn him or something? My boyfriend who is also a huge Hellraiser fan asked that when I read him the chapter with Angelique and Dreamer. Anhywho there is something to ponder. I love those sex scenes. happy I'm not the only one who just sits there at work and thinks of scenes like those,
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  • From ANON - Ladydoma on June 10, 2006
    That is cool. I like it, Are your going to n continue? I'm working on Chapter Seven.
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  • From ANON - ladydoma on June 04, 2006
    Thank you for updating. See I am still working on Leviathen's Bloodline and so stuck, I can not think of a good sex scene worthy enough for Pinhead and the woman he is with. See yours are one othe best I have read.So any more up dates?
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  • From ANON - ladydoma on May 16, 2006
    I love your writingings I might have mentioned this before. I myself write of Pinhead getting some. I think you are a great writer. But I think also you should stick to him fucking one character and making a fic out of that. Just a suggestion all in all I am trilled with what I read from you please keep it up!!!!!
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