Reviews for Secrets

BY : Chriscent


  • From xxxevilgrinxxx on January 22, 2006

    nothing wrong with a little smut sweetheart :)
    EG:)

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  • From bima140277 on November 05, 2005

    Hey I didn't see that at Vdff.

    Wow never been so happy that Johns is dead!

    B

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  • From ANON - Nicolina on November 01, 2005

    Hm, well, personally Id love to see you write more non-slash... But thats just me. ;-)

    Nic.

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  • From Fenris Mourningstar on November 01, 2005

    Nice. I've always been very fond of this pairing, although there are hardly any fics with them... The story itself is very good but the best part is your awesome, poetic writing style. It works wonderfully to create the ambience of the story and compliments your excellent characterizations. I didn't catch any mistakes, but you might wish to consider using the term "dislocate" when mentioning Riddick's painful trick with his shoulders.
    You're a very talented writer and personally I'd be very glad to see you write more slash.

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  • From ANON - Nicolina on November 01, 2005

    Wow! You write very well! Im not into slash fics, but this got me curious, and yes, it could very well fit into the movie... I didnt find any nits. It all looked great. The imagery was perfect.

    Nic.

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