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By : darkangel985
  • From ANON - Paranoidcharlotte on October 23, 2005
    Loved the update!!! I thought that the idea of god playing poker over souls very cool but don't be to mean to poor John in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Morningstar on October 22, 2005
    Oh, that's not good, I guess he can't expect to get away from everything, even if he is the Consort. But I'd think he'd be let off more easily then Balthazar *hint hint*. Nice interaction with the angels (Michael). I guess being angel doesn't mean you'll act like a saint. Honestly, have to be restrained by God. (Guess you can't really be sure what gender they are, but by the looks they sent Lu and John they wouldn't need it.) Take Lucifer for instance, he used to be God's favourite before he became the Devil. He was said to be the most beautiful of all the angels, so beautiful that he was known as The Morningstar. Then there was Gabrielle who lost her mind, allied herself with Lucifer's son, then tried to bring him over to our plane. Does anyone else see a pattern here? How long till Michael falls from grace?
    Sorry, I didn't review chapter 10. I barely had time to read it, it's my final year in high school and they're making us earn it. I'll try to add a review for chapter 10 later.
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  • From ANON - Paranoidcharlotte on October 21, 2005
    Hey just want to tell u that I love ur story so KEEP UPDATING REGUARLY or I will be sad and cry :( also I am curious as to what lucifer would have done to Mammon could u possibly work that in somewhere??

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  • From ANON - Patty on October 18, 2005
    Oh that was a nice cliffie! God...Matthew's wife deserves the bastard...what kind of wife reacts in such a bitchy way and wondering how she can possibly continue living a life of luxury?? I love how you're slowly destroying their lives...it's the kind of torture I'd gladly pay to see on my worst enemies. Will you be punishing Matthew's entire family, including his son? That would be so awesome to see his entire world just decay an delapidate in front of him w/out any way to stop it. Great chapter and I especially like how John got Ballie to agree w/ him (even tho Ballie would have to agree anyways).
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  • From ANON - Wolflady on October 17, 2005
    Poor Johnny, getting all his fun ruined.. *pouts* ^^
    Sex scen soon, please...?

    As long as you continue to update QUITE often.. :P *giggles*

    More.
    Soon.
    Please.

    *hands over a plate of cookies*
    ^.~
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  • From ANON - Morningstar on October 12, 2005
    Yay! Update!
    Loved how you made John help Steve.
    The discussion with Lucifer was definitly good. The source of all evil, lying on a bed with silk-sheets and doing his nails.. Clearly vanity isn't restricted to humans.
    You were right, John is independent and just being himself here. He really has no limits; how many people would take such liberties with the Devil. Lucifer would never let himself be mounted like that, but I suspect John's gotten closer than anyone before him (or he's the only one that's lived to tell the tale).
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  • From ANON - Wolflady on October 10, 2005
    Niii-iice... ^.~

    I Love your John/Lu scenes, they seem soo..so..real. Kinda. ^^

    Update soon, please..
    Please.
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Patty on October 09, 2005
    I love the way you characterize Lucifer...it's like an arrogance that fits him like a glove. The way John fights and demands for dominance and Lu's powers as the devil, I start to wonder sometimes who has who around their little pinky.... It seems so sinful to like this pairing...maybe because you write it so well.
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  • From ANON - Patty on October 05, 2005
    Yey!!! Awesome chapter. I like that John is gonna try to get Chas to fall. Does that mean Chas will become human? Also, if John is actually causing mayhem, does that sorta tip the balances and stuff? And I liked the name of the corporation.."luce inc" hahahaa. So I was wondering since John took Mammon's position in hell, where's Mammon? What happened to his powers? I also really like how John's character is so very human and because of that, he makes such a good 2nd in command in hell and causing mischief. I didn't get to review for the beginning chapters of this story, but I had wanted to mention how much I love the scenes where you have Lu being possessive of John. The image that sticks in my mind the most is when Lu holds John in the garden in Hell and Lu is telling him how all beauty in Hell is reserved for Lu and Lu alone, while holding John tighter around the waiste. That was just a phenomenally kickass scene of twisted romantic indulgences and an anime "Wah!!!" moment.
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  • From ANON - Wolflady on October 04, 2005
    Wooooow.. :)
    Nice chapter(as always). ^^

    Update soon, please..
    Please.
    ^.~
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  • From ANON - Morningstar on October 02, 2005
    I loved how you worked in my suggestion for John's 'childhood' friend/lover. I sense more punishment for John's father after this one (hint hint), and maybe Steve's father.
    I hope you're not going to make this a John/Steve-pairing? I like Steve, but to me it's stricktly John/Lu in this fic (minus the brief John/Bally-scene).
    Also liked how you display John's complete and utter lack of fear for Lu. He's independent and does what he wants, no matter who disapproves. "..Wouldn't go back to Hell, 'cause his ass was still sore.." - perfect example of John's independence.
    Make John's brother suffer. Oh, please make him suffer! While his brother is out saving the world, his biggest consern is "Should I wear Prada, Gucci or Armani to work today?".
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  • From ANON - Patty on September 28, 2005
    Oh!! one thing, will we be seeing Constantine take a more active role in commanding Hell? Like...making political decisions or strategic decisions and such?
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  • From ANON - Patty on September 28, 2005
    Wow, I never really cared for exhibitionism, and although it was kinda freaky to imagine hundreds of demons watching Constantine and Lucifer go at it, it was still up there in the high drool factor. Great chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Morningstar on September 26, 2005
    He's not human, so I would think eating and drinking is more indulgence then need. But hey, being a demon he should know gluttony. Bit of an exhibitionist. Good to see him stand up for himself 'human-plaything' indeed. Would think they recognized their own kind, at least Lucifer's consort, second in command of Hell. Oh, and he gets to piss off 'Bally'.
    I like jealous Lu, or possessive, whichever, and the part about him being sick of the minion's presence and 'his precious exorcist'. Currently torturing myself wondering what John's next job is. Keep it up, new chapter, please. I said; please!
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  • From ANON - Wolflady on September 26, 2005
    *thinks 'bout it*
    If John gets more food, he gets more energy, thus he can have more sex & we get more smut...
    So, 'kay, you can feed him. :P

    *drolls*
    Hot,Hot,Hot!! ^^

    Update soon, please..
    Please.
    ^.~
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