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By : darkangel985
  • From ANON - loner654 on October 19, 2005
    EVIIILLL I SAY EVIIILLL!!!! Oh my goodness! That is complete and utter pleasureable torture there. I give a handshale my friend a round of appluase to your winked mind! Wow I wonder what would happen when john returns..hmmm lol This was excellent luv. Simply bloody enjoyed it. I womder if Bally will learn from this or just do it again to experience it again. Oh as a name for the baby...still giving it some thought..maybe if it is a boy you can name him Arthemis or something really exotic and if its a girl maybe a nature sort of name like Sunshine or Kitty lol just a couple of suggestions luv. Great chapter by the way. Continue the good work!
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  • From ANON - Loki on October 15, 2005
    Wow, Bally is sure helping John get into heaven huh? Now, onto more important things: names! Well, Balthazar means King in Greek, and John means God is Merciful or Gift of God in Hebrew so the bebe has a lot to live upto! I went through a lot of names (I'm taking the whole naming thing seriously btw lol) and decided it had to have nothing to do with God, obviously, cos you can't see Bally agreeing to that and I like odd names with meanings so here's what I found.
    Varvara - Greek - Stranger
    Layla - Arabic - Dark Beauty (like this one!)
    Keahi - Hawaiian - Flames, fire
    Donovan - Gaelic - Dark Warrior
    Theron - Greek - Hunter
    Devante - Spanish - Fighter of Wrong (like this too, although I've used it in one of my orig. stories)
    So what do you think? I can find more if you want. I don't know whether to root for a boy or a girl...give me a clue here!
    Love,

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - loner654 on October 12, 2005
    Sorry luv! didn't mean for the confusion just relying the point that John neglects Chaz, not you sweetie. Cause he just left him there but i guess you can;t blame him cause he was worried about Bally. Was completely happy with the morning scene! XD they are so sweet togeteher. And i think Bally could become a security guard at a night club or something with his demon form. Poor old man but he should have seen that Bally was only helping. Great job sweetie *gives you crumpets and tea* and good to hear that your comp is up! good job!
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  • From ANON - mirage on October 11, 2005
    Great new update! This is one of my most favorite stories, and probably because there aren't many long John/Balthazar stories out there. I very much favour the two of them as a couple. You should make the baby a boy, but I suppose that will come in many chapters ahead. Be sure to update soon!!!
    kisses,
    mirage

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  • From ANON - IciaJ on October 11, 2005
    lOVE IT I want to hear more
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  • From ANON - Loki on October 07, 2005
    *Sighs happily and cuddles darkangel* Wonderful. I like how neither of them were able to voice their feelings (because that would have been totally unrealistic) but they managed to show them through their actions. Cwute! Now skip a month or so and get to the baby!

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - mirage on October 05, 2005
    Great new update! I love this story. You better update soon!!!
    kisses,
    mirage
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  • From ANON - loner654 on October 05, 2005
    XD I LOVE THIS CHAP!!! *glomps you* this was just wonderful!!! I love it! great job on it! very hot smutt scene! *gives you um something lol um a cookie* oh and some oj lol i really like it i love it how john finally came to his senses and so did bally! But why does Chad have to be so negelected hmmmmmmmmmmm? lol good job though
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  • From ANON - loner654 on September 29, 2005
    *helps john beat up kidnappers* Don't you ever dare to hurt any of them again!!!) This was great sweetie! It was really fantastic! Those kidnappers didn't know wat they had gotten themselves into lol Poor Bally he is a true mother and its about damn time that John has accpeted his feelings (does this mean more smut? oooooo i hopeso) And dont worry about the whole computer thing I un derstand! ^_-
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  • From ANON - Loki on September 27, 2005
    Come on! Bally's a demon! He's not stupid - he'll realise what Lu's trying to do and stop John....won't he? And le bebe had better be okay! *Hits authoress with Balthazar doll tearfully*
    Hope your computer gets fixed soon hun, cos you have me addicted to this story and slowing up now would probably cause me to have a nervous collapse or something equally nice, and you wouldn't want that now would you? Brilliant as ever.

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - loner654 on September 26, 2005
    O_O NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! BALLY!!!! LUCIFER MUST DIEEEE IF HE HURTS JOHN'S BALLY AND BABY!!! They will survive and John will kick some ass!!! BWAHAHAHA!!! Please let Bally be ok!!! Go john, stop denying ur feelings and go to your convient fuck LOLLOL wow the sounds pretty strange to say! lol But good job on this chap u left me in suspense can't wait 4 ur next update. -_^ *gives you a baby girrafe*
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  • From ANON - Loki on September 26, 2005
    Noooooooooooooo! *Clutches Bally to her in order to protect him* Bring him back!
    Don't worry about the time jumps hun, I'm grateful for them. We've got at least 4 months to go (or will the baby come early because it's um....special?) and if you wrote about every single day...I'd probably kill you. But you managed the jump very well, so don't fret.
    Now, go rescue Balthazar and the baby!

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - mirage on September 22, 2005
    Awesome story. Continue as soon as you can!!!
    kisses,
    mirage
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  • From ANON - Loki on September 19, 2005
    Die Angela die! *Sets voodoo doll of Angela on fire* Muhahahahahaha! Oooooooh, I can't believe the cops caught them ^_^ and trust Bally to find it amusing. *Looks hopeful* Mind you, if John's paying the fine, then the LEAST Balthazar could do is make it up to him. John's musings about punishment are also verrrrrrrrry interesting.
    *Bursts into tears and clings onto darkangel* I've got to go away for a week with no internet access! You'll have to write lots and lots so I can give you multiple reviews when I get back! See ya soon,

    ~Loki - on vacation
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  • From ANON - loner654 on September 18, 2005
    LOLOL Well at least it wasn't a poor innocent sales woman but she proably would have drooled over the scene. And it would have been cheaper for John. And Angela needs to leave the couple alone. And Bally is becoming more humorous by the chapter. Good work! *gives you an apple pie and a baby gorilla that has a squirrel spirit inside it* Enjoy! ^_^ (....cough cough *more* cough*smutt*...cough choke wheeze)
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