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Reviews for A Day at the Dentist's

By : bloodstaindstoat
  • From ANON - on January 11, 2017

    Exceptional. Absolutly loved it. 


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  • From wendi-bnkywuv on December 29, 2008
    Wow! That's going to fill my head with nightmares tonight! A few things i would like to point out.


    'The feral glimmer in the dentist’s eyes intensified as he peered down at the obviously befuddled Seymour. His lips curled into a malign grin that showed his spotless shining sharp teeth.'-By this point, I was breaking into a sweat. WHen I saw the warning for blood play, I knew I was in for a surprise, but THIS?!?

    'Trying to force the smaller man’s lips open, the dentist began nibbling on his lips. He bit, none too gently, on the smaller man’s bottom lip, hard enough for blood to start flowing, and sucked, worrying the small incision. The blood from the cut flowing into the dentist’s mouth, giving him strong heady taste of the man beneath him.'-Holy shit! Blood drinking? Damn scary, and from Orin!

    'Seymour finally opened his lips, in a vain attempt to tell him to stop (a/n: heheh..foolish, foolish Seymour….), seizing this opportunity, the dentist thrust his tongue into the wet cavity, ravaging the smaller man’s mouth with a fierce intensity. Seymour’s blood tainted the kiss with a metallic taste that mingled and mixed into one that was purely ‘Seymour’.'-Whoa! One word: CREEPY!

    'Never, never had Seymour wanted to be asleep so bad in his entire life.'-LOL! I know that feeling!

    'Though whether the gasp was from pain or pleasure, not even Seymour could tell.'-Interesting spot there.

    '...a torture in their feather light caresses, that switched abruptly to pinching and clawing.'-feather light caress torutre? I love this!

    'By this point he had Seymour crying out at every blow, twin trails of tears dripping down his face.'-Well by this point, I almost had twin trails of tears dripping down my face too!

    'The only thing worse than the pain of feeling as though he’d be torn in two, was the shame that he’d actually enjoyed it. Enjoyed the pain, the humiliation, the fact that this was all horribly wrong.'-DAMN! It's like you KNOW me!

    'The whimpering botanist on the floor decided, then and there, that he really did want to chop the dentist into itty bitty pieces, and feed him to the giant blood-thirsty plant back at Mushnik’s. This thought terrified him far more than anything the dentist did, or could have done. '-True, so, so true!


    I must applaud you! I can invision this ALL MUCH TOO WELL! My school made a play about this movie, and trying to imagine these things happening to my school mates (not to mention, a couple of my FRIENDS!) in the context of the characters in this fanfic...AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK! Face it, you've inspired me! I'll be writing some fanfics for this movie as well!
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  • From DoctorCrane on May 22, 2007
    Nice. Interesting challange to pull off, but it was nicely done.
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  • From on January 10, 2006
    You have made me feel very happy and special...
    Hey, my acting club has just started Little Shop of horros! And thesd really hot guys are playing Seymour and Orin ^_^
    So you know I just had to rush over to AFF.net!
    Then by chance I found my new favorite pairing/story was the only one in its catagory!
    I thank you so much for mysteriously being here!
    Thanks

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  • From ANON - Natalie on January 01, 2006
    I love Little Shop-this fic was GREAT! I definitley wish that had happened..xD Great writing.
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  • From LadyWindermere on July 30, 2005
    deliciously twisted.
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  • From Yamima on May 02, 2005
    This is a well written peice of smut!

    I'm not complaining
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2005
    .......
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  • From ANON - Meg on April 27, 2005
    OH GOD I BEG YOU! Please write more LSoH fics! This was awsome!
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  • From ANON - ... on January 08, 2005
    Amazing that you wrote this so early in the morning and it makes sense. Good job on that point alone. Also the thought definetely crosses the mind of what-ifs in that musical...Ah. There are quite a few different paths that could be taken. To bad i suck at smut...you should write some more LSoH stuff ^_^ Thankies!
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  • From ANON - Bora Toki on October 09, 2004
    Er... thats sorta scary but good. I like the way you tied the whole thing into the actual plot. Plus it just gives a whole better reason for Seamor to kill him :D Nifty
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  • From ANON - Sarah on June 08, 2004
    You have totally made my day with this fic! I was just talking with my friend about how I wish there could be a good Orin/Seymour fic online somewhere, and I haven't seen one until now. Wow, I was so excited to see one up so soon! I really liked the fic- the characterizations were totally accurate, and it was very intense. You are a great writer! Good luck and thanks so much for being the one to finally write a Little Shop fiction! (how about Seymour/AudreyII?)

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  • From ANON - Vaela on May 29, 2004
    gay smut
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